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Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 03:43 am Title: 10

Good for Buffy for standing by her guy! She's not gonna let Dru ruin her and William's life. She's right..if the baby is his , the only responsibility he has is toward the baby, not Dru. Loved the last line.

Loved it , more soon please. :)

Author's Response: So happy you loved it, thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 10:09 pm Title: 10

*Grah* evil Drusilla my god i hate her but it's good to see Buffy sticking with him. More please!

Author's Response: Absolutely, more coming up. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 10:04 pm Title: 10

Good chapter. I am glad that we did not have to read the scene where Drusilla told Spike about the pregnancy. Thank you for that. I am also happy that for once Spike told Buffy what was wrong and that Buffy listened and did not run away. Thanks for the update and update when you can.

Author's Response: *lol* What can I say? I didn't feel that scene would be necessary, nor very important for the story. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 09:35 pm Title: 10

Uh oh! Wonder what Buffy has in mind! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Next chap is up, hope you'll like. Thank you!

Reviewer: hhh569 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: 10

Buffy kick Dru's behind. She needs it.

Author's Response: You are not wrong. :) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 09:07 pm Title: 10

*phew* I'm glad that neither William is going back to Drusilla nor Buffy is giving up. Feared it would go worse.

Author's Response: Guess it could've gotten a lot worse. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 09:06 pm Title: 10

Ooh I like a confident Buffy. Bring it on, Dru!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 06:59 pm Title: 10

That came out better than I thought..

Go ahead Buffy..

Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Good to hear. Thank you!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 09:54 pm Title: 9

I hope the talk between Buffy and Spike was enough - because Drusilla is about to drop the bomb *sigh* I really hope William won't be silly.

Author's Response: Let's hope he won't. :) Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2009 - 04:27 pm Title: 8

I liked the chapter but I don't like the idea that Drusilla is pregnant. It is just another roadblock for Spike and Buffy. However, it is your story and I am just along for the ride. I have hopes that Drusilla will eventually get what is coming to her.

Author's Response: She will. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:08 pm Title: 9

I'm so glad they talked..they needed to. Good also that Buffy went with him to Dru's house. Now let's see if he believes her , hope not cause that would be really stupid. =(.

Can't wait to see what happens now..loved it .

Author's Response: Next chapter is up, hopefully you'll like it. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 11:01 pm Title: 9

Glad Spike and Buffy cleared the air. I guess this is where Dru thinks she has Spike under her thumb. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure Dru will get what she deserves eventually... ;) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 09:43 pm Title: 9

Oh god no please don't let her be pregnant to him and if she is going to say she is please let it be lies so Spike can find out quickly and move on.

Awesome chapter thanks for sharing and please update very soon!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter, thank you!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2009 - 08:32 pm Title: 9

Here comes.. Dru's way of keeping Spike and enjoying his pain.. so she can win..

After he saw her in bed with someone else.. maybe he won't be the fool.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 08:53 pm Title: 8

Dru is such a witch! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: That she is. Next chap is up, hope you'll like. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: iamghost Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 08:46 pm Title: 8

Ugh.. I hate Drusilla, she is so evil! But I'm nervous now that there won't be a happy Spuffy :(
But I think you will figure out a way right? *hopes*
Great chappie!

Author's Response: Of course there will be happy Spuffy! :) Glad you liked the chapter, thanks for your reveiw!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 06:10 pm Title: 8

Love! Love the new chapter.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 11:12 am Title: 8

Uh-huh... besides the spuffyness I enjoyed reading things just got complicated. I hope it won't get too bad (or William going back to Drusilla) because of the pregnancy. She even doesn't know who the father is - I hope too that William isn't so silly to trust her.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Hopefully you won't have to worry too much. :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 02:23 am Title: 8

Loved the Spuffy sexiness! So, so sweet. And now crazy ho bag is pregnant. Hopefully William will not fall for that trap and insist on a paternity test, and Buffy will stick by him no matter what. Dru is really delusional...feel so sorry for any kid she has.

Looking forward to the next chappie!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, just posted the next chap. :)

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 10:02 pm Title: 8

Awesome update so sweet and sexy, more please.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 07:32 pm Title: 8

I hope that Drusilla's plan does not cause Spike and Buffy any additional pain. I hope that her nefarious plan is short lived. Please update soon. Spike deserves to be happy and not always so sad.

Author's Response: You're right. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 02:24 pm Title: 8

Drusilla - pregnant.. And of course is going to try to use William ..

Yuck..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Good to hear. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2009 - 02:10 pm Title: 8

Well, that won't be a fun conversation. Drusilla really does live in her own little delusional world, doesn't she? If she thinks William will give a damn about her being pregnant, he knows she cheated a lot, so his first thought will probably be that it's not his, and I'm still hoping it's not. I feel sorry for this kid, having a complete nutcase for a mother.

Author's Response: I agree. For some reason, I just love writing evil/crazy Dru. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 02:20 am Title: 7

Great chappie, even tho poor William seems so unsure of himself after what he went thru with Dru. I'm afraid of what she's planning,cause she is one evil bitch. Somebody needs to seriously kick her ass.
Loved the end, looks like we'll get some Buffy and William lovin' :)

More soon please, I'm loving this!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much, I'm so happy you're loving the story. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 11:22 pm Title: 7

Uh-huh... so William lost his belongings now. I hope he can get back other stuff (means like the CDs being still available).
With Buffy's questions (leading to Then nothing else matters) she set everything in the right again - nothing else matters. Hopefully that's how it will turn out. :)

Author's Response: Let's hope so. :) Thanks for your review!

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