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Reviewer: ii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2009 - 12:36 am Title: Two

I love this! And I like how you incorporate how the way the ungrateful people she saved so often saw her as a troublemaker and a violent delinquent are again being used to label her and help a bunch of humans who live in a world that exists because of Buffy that she's somehow less than they are and so they can do whatever they like to her. Buffy and Spike teamed up... can't wait to read more!
Seriously, can't wait. PLEASE update as soon as you can! I check back way too often for new chapters of stories and it's always so painful!

Author's Response: LOL! Your review made me giggle. I promise I'll update as soon as I can. Hopefully sending the next chappy off to my beta tonight or tomorrow and then I'll post as soon as I can after that.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 10:18 pm Title: Two

Oh my, what they put Buffy through just in the name of science. Two whole weeks. *shudder* Only demons got it worse there.
Enjoyed the update - hopefully Buffy and Spike can make it out of there, working together now.
(PS - that chapter shows as chapter 'one' too.)

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know! I'll fix that as soon as possible. I'm happy you're enjoying the story and I'll try to update again soon!

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 04:13 pm Title: Two

oooooh you have made me hate the initiative all over again. Hope Spike and Buffy get to give some vengeful and painful payback.
Willow seems a bit keen to get Buffy back just so she can tell her her own troubles, hope her character doesnt turn out that way.

Author's Response: Oh there will be pain, no doubt about that ;) And I think Willow is just so desperate to have Buffy back that she's focusing on all the things in her life that she needs her friend for. Not that the only reason she wants her back is for a sounding board. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 12:11 pm Title: Two

You paint a very clear picture of life as a captive in the Initiative. Now I'm wondering whether Riley will be a good guy and help them escape or not. The truce needs some time to develop into mutual trust though, so I'm not holding my breath. The Initiative obviously aren't aware they're attracting the wrath of not just the Slayer and her Watcher, but an unstable witch, the COW and Joyce, who wields a mean axe.
I so look forward to the smack-down! Still... in the meantime let's have some Spuffy bonding...

Author's Response: I'm not sure where Riley will fall in this story, he keeps writing himself. I think he'll be a little more on the fence than in canon, but we'll see. They definitely need time to work on the trust, but there is some there already, enough to cast the other doubts aside until they get out at least. And yeah, the Initiative will have all hell break loose for sure! Thanks for reviewing and I'll update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Alissa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 04:05 am Title: Two

Am really enjoying this! Hope there's more to come :P

Author's Response: Thank you very much. There's more to come soon!

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 02:48 am Title: Two

I am very interested in reading more of this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'll update again soon

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 02:45 am Title: Two

I'm liking the story so far. I like the idea of Buffy being an Initiative captive... makes the Spuffiness flow easier. I am hooked and waiting on the next chapter with much anticipation. I hope Riley follows his instincts and helps Buffy out in someway.

Author's Response: Yes, being stuck in that hellhole together brings them a lot closer together with less bias. Buffy's eyes have certainly been opened to include the shades of grey in the world now. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 02:01 am Title: Two

good start, more please

Author's Response: Thanks! More to come soon

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 01:16 am Title: Two

I love this. A new favorite. I'll be looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I'll update as quickly as I can.

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2009 - 12:17 am Title: Two

These people are sick, it's funny they call the others animals, when they're the real monsters. Idiots don't even know a human when they see one, when Giles finds out about this, there will be hell to pay. I hope Buffy and Spike give them exactly what they deserve and burn the place to the ground, and hopefully the truce will last once they do get out. At least Riley seems to have a bit of a conscience, even though I don't have much respect for him for working there in the first place. Can Walsh possibly have a very bloody death? I would love to see that. The psycho bitch seriously needs to die.

Author's Response: Oh yeah, Ripper's gonna come out in a very good way... I'm looking forward to writing that scene. And Riley is turning out to be pretty interesting in this story because he's not really following the line that I plotted for him... And I promise I will give Walsh a lovely violent death just because you asked so nicely! Thanks for reviewing!

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