Reviews For Serpent's Egg
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Reviewer: jackson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 - 08:42 pm Title: Ten

great story can't wait for more

Reviewer: Awesome Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 03:45 pm Title: Ten

This is one of my fav fics you are an imaginative writer with an excellent style of storytelling. My only worry is that your beta is letting you down. Just a small amount of tweaking is needed with punctuation and a couple of typos eg: Treat = Threat

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 10:01 am Title: Ten

Always glad to see an update :)
Would indeed be bad if lets say Buffy would loose the charm and an unwanted guest would be able to cross the wards. Well they have to know first what they are made for so she should be save too. But maybe not able to return to the mansion. ;)
Willow seems to be on Spike's side too. Can't hurt to have a supporter. And Spike really tries to get along / be helpful. And mainly because of what Buffy would want. :)
Willow saw it too.
~ Looking forward to more, enjoyed the read.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 06:26 am Title: Ten

Glad you like the banner and I love the update, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2009 - 02:30 am Title: Ten

Another great chapter. Your way of showing Willow's character is perfect; not too-sweet and yay for Spike, but not desperate with fear, but reasonable and brave in a Willow way. i liked how Spike was with Willow, too. And I'm glad Buffy isn't in total denial about something happening between her and Spike.
update soon!

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