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Reviewer: Charisma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2009 - 07:17 pm Title: The Bronze

Ok first of all i love your story, you are an amazing writer, sometimes i read spuffy stories and i like them but the writing just isnt how it is supposed to be said or isnt like the character, but you make the writing become the character and it is utterly amazing. love this story keep it up xxxx charisma

Author's Response: Wow, Charisma, you have no idea how wonderful it feels to hear something like that. I majored in creative writing in school, so it's nice to hear something like that...believe me! :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2009 - 07:15 pm Title: The Bronze



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Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2009 - 04:17 pm Title: The Bronze

Another brilliant chapter. Loved the Bronze bit altho not too happy with Xander's reaction to Buffy and Spike dancing but it was to be expected. Glad Buffy is letting herself be happy with Spike - it should have been like that in Joss Whedon's BtVS. Fantastic story, really enjoying reading it. Well done :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled to hear that!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 06:45 pm Title: The Bronze

Xander's really annoying. I wish he would just mind his own business. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks Pet!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 01:34 am Title: The Bronze

Wish Buffy would tell the gang to mind their own business! Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: :) You're right....they really should mind their own beeswax! :) Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 - 10:19 pm Title: The Bronze

Ah two chapters for me to read today :)
Loved the update. The visit at the Bronze went well (but only because the others didn't find out about Spike yet). Xander reacted not well (not sure about Willow and Tara, maybe that would have gone better).
At last Dawn is supportive :)
Now Buffy has to find out what she wants (and really feels). Not sure how long it will take her.

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I'm gonna skip ahead about a month in the next chapter, so Buffy's feelings will be a little more developed and clear. :) I hope...LOL

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 - 09:15 pm Title: The Bronze

Lovely chappie, hon. The Bronze was fun and the alley sex was WAY HOT ! Xander is pissing me off, but that's nothing new. Can't wait til they find out, I'm guessing it'll get angsty. Poor Buffy. she's kinda confused about her feelings for Spike, hpefully she'll be able to figure it out soon.

Waiting patiently for the next update! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I don't know why I have so much fun writing Xander as being jerky. I guess part of it stems from the Buffy Reunion 2008 at the Paley Festival. I found Nick B. to be kind of a jerk on the panel, but maybe that was just me not feeling his sarcasm. *shrug* More up soon!

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 - 08:08 pm Title: The Bronze

The passion between them is incredible. Talk about hot ^_^ But it does worry me that Buffy thinks she's confusing sex with feelings. Wanting him to hold her as she falls asleep isn't an effect of incredible orgasms. And I wonder if Spike is holding up as well as he portrays it. I'll wait in great anticipation for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks Jaden! Buffy's definitely got some feelings to sort out, but she's definitely going to find as time goes on that she's got more than just lusty feelings for him. :)

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