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Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2009 - 10:08 am Title: No More Secrets

Hmmm ... okay I trust you! This is a brilliant story. You should be proud of it :-)

Author's Response: Aww...thanks so much!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2009 - 03:49 pm Title: No More Secrets

I take it Spike's going to get his soul. Good for him, not that I think he really needs it. But still, good. And that was quite a twist at the end, with Dana. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! More is explained in Chapter 15! :)

Reviewer: Raina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 11:36 pm Title: No More Secrets

Ah! So, I'm pretty sure that Spike's going to get his soul in Africa, but the Dana thing totally threw me for a loop... Good job! I can't wait to where you take this next. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Raina! :) Hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of the story! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 10:31 pm Title: No More Secrets

This chapter confused me and made me cry! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Awww...thanks PhotographyNut! Hang in there..happiness is on the way!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 09:57 pm Title: No More Secrets

I guess i'll trust you lol! poor buffy..

Author's Response: Yep! Trust me! Lots of drama and lots of fluff coming up!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 09:55 pm Title: No More Secrets

I knew a new slayer would be coming just didn't think it would be Dana. I don't think spike needs a soul to be good at all. I think he's unique and can do it on his own. I'm glad Buffy stood up for herself finally against her friends and Giles. They really need to see that there is always a gray and not just black and white.

Author's Response: This Dana's going to have some differences than the one on ATS. For instance, she won't be chopping off Spike's arms. LOL...that was just...ok, I don't even wanna think about that. :) Hope you continue to enjoy the story! Thanks!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 09:40 pm Title: No More Secrets

See that's the thing - I never believed that Spike needed the soul to be good. Giles thinks otherwise.
I loved Buffy standing up against her demanding friends for the things that she wanted - aka Spike.
Unexpected twists here... both Spike ready to get his soul back as to see Dana in the game.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! I agree with you. I don't think he needs his soul to be right either. But I guess, if that's what he's going after, they can't exactly bitch about the fact that he doesn't have one anymore, because he'll have one. They'll have to bitch about other things. LOL!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: No More Secrets

Stupid jealous prejudiced Xander and stupid blind Giles. Acting quite in character though. And could Spike's timing be any worse? He's gone off after his soul hasn't he? I hope Buffy can weather the loneliness while he's gone. Hopefully she and Tara can keep each other company.
By the way I noticed a typo - 'she felt those cool hands on his shoulders' should be her shoulders...



Author's Response: Yeah, Spike definitely had his timing wrong, but at least he owned up to that. Thanks for pointing out the typo! Sometimes just one set of eyes isn't good enough. I guess I got used to Betaing other stories a long time ago that I figured I could do my own pretty well. LOL...:)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 07:38 pm Title: No More Secrets

OMG!! Great chappie, this is getting better and better.Can Xander be more of a judgemental jerk? I think he'd be more accepting of Buffy sleeping with a goat , for God's sake! Idiot ! Hated Giles too, thinks Spike is just like Angel UGH ... makes me crazy. I guess Spike is going for his soul? or maybe not..
And now Dana is in the mix.

Evil cliffie, can't wait for the next chappie! =)

Author's Response: LOL...thanks Ami! Yeah, Spike's definitely nothing like Angel or Angelus. He's, as it's been said in this story, not a textbook case. I feel, like a lot of people are saying, that Spike doesn't need his soul, and if that's in fact what he's going after, it's more of a...hmm...safety net, I suppose.

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 05:25 pm Title: No More Secrets

I'm just in awe. I'm usually a very verbose person, but I really can't think of anything to say that would cover everything. I can barely wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: :) Great to know you're enjoying the story! Thanks!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 05:24 pm Title: No More Secrets

My heart is breaking for poor Buffy. So much all at once! It always did frustrate me that Spike did so much for them during the Summer and then they still couldn't see that he was different. I just want to slap Xander and Giles. I'm glad that Willow is going to get help early though. I'm hoping for no Tara death because she is one of my favorite characters. I'm confused about Dana though. I though she became strong because of the spell Willow did at the end of the season. Does this mean that Faith is dead so she's a slayer now? Love the story!

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, throughout the story I've kind of peppered in some lines about a new slayer possibly coming in, but they weren't sure how that all worked. Of course, I let it be until this chapter. As you can tell, yes, Dana is a Slayer. Faith, for all I know at this point is still alive...just in prison. It's just that when Buffy died...again...a new Slayer was born.

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