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Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2009 - 06:31 pm Title: Light in the Dark

Hmm glad Xander apologised to Tara but he is still being unfair to Buffy, great chapter, loved it :-)

Author's Response: Thanks Laura!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 10:05 pm Title: Light in the Dark

For some reason everytime Xander talks makes me want to bang my head on the desk! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: LOL...don't bang too hard though, because that often leads to headaches. ;) Chapter 18 will be up SOON!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 09:39 pm Title: Light in the Dark

Loved the chapter, please keep them coming! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! I think you'll all enjoy Chapter 18! I hope so anyway...:) It's kinda cram-packed with lots...but it's one hump I had to get over in order to get to the rest of the story. :)

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 01:11 pm Title: Light in the Dark

Great chapter. Love Xander compariing Spike to Hannibal Lecter. Of course he doesn't know the chip doesn't work on Buffy, does he? I can't remember...

Author's Response: Crap....now I can't remember if I wrote that or not. I don't THINK Spike or Buffy know that the chip doesn't work on Buffy. Maybe somebody who has a better memory than me (like a goldfish) can refresh me on that. LOL...I'll go back and check in the story, but I don't think I ever came to that at this point.:)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 11:07 am Title: Light in the Dark

*nods* It doesn't hurt (in fact it's good) that Buffy told Spike that she loves him before he got his soul back / or told her he would get his soul back. The meaning is much deeper (in my mind).
Travers is very sure that Dana won't be a danger or escape. This could bite him in his a**.

He only wanted his friends to be happy if he was happy with the reasons they were happy If Xander wants his friends to be happy he must them let be. As it was said many times before - Spike killed in the past but so did Anya.
Now what next... looking forward to it.

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten! Yeah, Xander just has to get past his issues, because whether he likes it or not, Buffy wants Spike in her life, so he's gonna have to get over it or get out.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 07:17 am Title: Light in the Dark

An action packed chapter! First we had Travers & Crazy Slayer. Who knew he could be so nice and sympathetic. Intriguing. Can't wait to see where this story line goes. Then you have Buffy and Anya. You wrote Anya perfectly. She's so endearing in her very selfish sorta way. It was nice she put out that olive branch even if it was for her own means. And then we have poor Spike. Yikes! And THEN we have her conversation with Xander, at first hopeful, then ultimately disappointing. I hope he gets his head out of his ass soon. Great great chapter.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks demona! I was hoping I portrayed Anya at least somewhat accurately! She really is a hard character to write...which is why you don't really see her too much in my story. LOL...

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 06:12 am Title: Light in the Dark

OK , you are a godess with these fast updates! Loved Anya in this, lol. Oh poor Spike, what he's going thru is horrible, but I guess he has to feel all that guilt and at least the First isn't around. I guess the angst is gonna start now? Xander is still annoying Ugh, what kind of apology was that?

Good chappie. more when you can. =)


Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Lucky for you, I'm skipping time a little, so we don't have to see Spike suffer so much. Yeah, he's gonna have some angst, BUT, he's not going to brood, because Buffy won't let him. You'll see. ;)

Reviewer: Jewel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 04:50 am Title: Light in the Dark

I really like this...can't wait to read the next chapter :o)

Author's Response: Thanks Jewel!!!

Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 04:29 am Title: Light in the Dark

Travers being nice? There has to be an ulterior motive, right?

And Spike still has his chip? Hmm... Looking forward to figuring this all out! :)

Author's Response: In an upcoming chapter, Travers is gonna be explaining a little more to Dana, who will be a bit more lucid. What he wants ultimately is to be able to rehabilitate her, because the council doesn't choose who is called next. And he wants to be able to rehabilitate her, because there's a reason she's been called, and he's sure of it. It's just that she's got so much against her that it's not looking so good right now. More on the Spike chip later. :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2009 - 02:02 am Title: Light in the Dark

Wow Xander really needs to grow up and stop comparing everyone to angel. His appology wasn't very nice to Tara either he should be more considerate of her feelings as well. I feel bad for Spike and i still don't think he needed a soul to be good but hopefully he will get back to Buffy soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Glad you're enjoying the story, still! You're absolutely right. Spike doesn't need to get his soul back, but as I tried to convey in his little scene, he feels like he needs to do it. He WANTS it, because he wants to be right for her. This is Spike's head we're talking about here...:)

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