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Reviewer: nea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2010 - 07:42 pm Title: Los Angeles

I'm really really enjoying this story so far and am only stopping to comment on this chapter because Spike somehow got into Hank's house without an invite. I just thought you might want to fix that. It's just a small mistake. The story really is fantastic.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2009 - 10:48 am Title: Los Angeles

Really loved the chapter, although I would've expected Spike to freak when Buffy told him about Dawn wanting to have sex. *lol* More, please!

Author's Response: LOL...thanks Pet!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 11:50 pm Title: Los Angeles

I felt Dawn was hitting below the belt throwing all of Buffy's past boyfriends in her face when Buffy was only looking out for her. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Photography Nut! You're right...but of course, Dawn is 15, and she doesn't want to be talked down to, so she's definitely hitting below the belt. But no worries...I don't have any plans at all to bring Angel in.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 11:29 pm Title: Los Angeles

Good for Xander to notice that (=how much of an idiot he'd become). I hope that knowledge will stick with him. He's hurting Anya and doesn't even notice it.

Ah Dawn... she's indeed growing up. And it sounds as if she has won the talk. Or better run away. Hopefully - if Buffy makes it feel better - will the next talk be better.
Hank? He really should send some checks (check) again.

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten! :) The next talk will be much like the last, but Buffy's gonna get some definite answers out of her sister just so she can have a little peace of mind. I'm still trying to decide how to write Hank. I've never written his character before, and we didn't see a lot of him on Buffy, but every time he was on, I enjoyed him. So I'm trying to decide if I want to make good excuses for him or make him the same dead beat Buffy thinks he is.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 10:25 pm Title: Los Angeles

Hey, if Buffy's dad's so loaded, where's the child support cheques for Dawn and the college fund for Buffy? I don't think I like him and he hasn't even put in an appearance yet...

Author's Response: Thanks All4Spike, yeah, Hank's a deadbeat. And Buffy's gonna be talking to him about that, yep!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 09:12 pm Title: Los Angeles

I get where Buffy is coming from with Dawn and sex but she's one to talk. She lost her virginity at 17 to a 200 yr. old vamp who was like 11 yrs. older than her in human yrs. So kettle, meet pot. But she does have to talk to her. I did like when she said she's young and probably won't end up with the first guy she sleeps with,too bad the writers never made that observation ,they always kept Angel in the background of Buffy's life UGH I hated that! Loved what Anya told Xander. Go Anya! They definitely should have had her say that in the show.Hopefully Xander will think about some things now. He's a hypocrite.

Good chappie, can't wait for Hank to show up! More soon please. =)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I had a whole storyline planned out for the Dawn sex thing, but I'm not sure I'm gonna go that route. I do want to see Dawn make some mistakes. She's not perfect...neither is her sister.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2009 - 08:49 pm Title: Los Angeles

That conversation didn't go well. Buffy is right but she needs to let Dawn lead her own life and make her own mistakes no matter how bad they are. I am glad that she is going to talk to her about it again and hopefully seeing there dad is a good thing. I loved what Anya said it was perfect and she gave Xander a lot to think about.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! I was wondering if I shouldn't write this storyline, but I think it'll be ok in the end. We'll see! :)

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