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Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2009 - 06:39 pm Title: Staking a Claim

Both sweet and hot. And funny how Spike 'threatened' Jake. Loved it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! Hope to have the new chapter posted tomorrow. I'm still feeling a bit under the weather, hence the lack of updates.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2009 - 10:55 pm Title: Staking a Claim

Finally I was able to finish this chapter. Work kept interrupting me. Stupid work. This was a great chapter. I loved it! I'm glad she was able to sit down and have a frank talk to Dawn about sex. Unfortunately, for a lot teenagers there is still not a lot of support and honest discussions from older adults. There left to float alone and potentially make bad decisions (a.k.a. Buffy Summers!). And it was also great to see the two sisters bonding, so many stories lack that, heck even the show. Totally pissed me off that they made Dawn into such a raging brat. Anyways, and what a nice ending, to have Buffy and Spike "bonding" like that. So to sum up, totally enjoyed this chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've gotten feedback elsewhere actually reaming Buffy a new one for going off with Spike and having sex with him right after her talk with Spike. The way I see it is that Buffy's an adult, and besides, it's not like they were flaunting it in Dawn's face. She was asleep! LOL

Reviewer: Eternal Love Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2009 - 02:29 am Title: Staking a Claim

So wonderful!! I love love LOVE this story!!! And I loved Spikes interaction with Jake *giggles* Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Aww...thank you! :) I'm glad you like it! I wanted to get some happy chapters in before all the Hank stuff. Then it's back to Dana....LOL! Can't forget about her.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2009 - 01:45 am Title: Staking a Claim

Wonder if anyone will notice the claim bite. Glad they claimed each other. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Haha...well, I'm sure it'll be widely talked about when Giles comes back into the picture.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/12/2009 - 12:51 am Title: Staking a Claim

I liked Buffy's talk with Dawn and was glad that Dawn was honest. Spike's talk with Jake made me laugh I could actually picture Spike doing that. Surprising about the claim but I'm glad it happend,

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! :) I'm glad you liked the Spike/Jake interaction. I don't intend to keep Jake in the story very much, but I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2009 - 11:17 pm Title: Staking a Claim

Sounds to me that Buffy found a good way to talk to Dawn; telling her that she should wait but also that she would know when the time is right.
LOL for making Spike believe that all Summers woman are very strong *g*
Good too that the door had a lock :D
Looking forward to more (like if the claim will change things).

Author's Response: Thanks cordykitten! :) Not sure it'll change much of anything since they're pretty much inseparable as it is. LOL...:)

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2009 - 10:28 pm Title: Staking a Claim

Yay! Claimy goodness! Love the totally embarrassing Buffy/Dawn exchange. Very realistic. More please.

Author's Response: :) Thanks All4Spike! Yeah, I had to picture what I might say in a situation like that. LOL...:)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2009 - 10:23 pm Title: Staking a Claim

Loved the Dawn and Buffy convo, made more sense and it went well. Poor Jake,*hehe* Spike really scared him, I love Buffy and Spike's relationship here, so healthy and mature, You write them really well =) And can I say the sex was HOT! Yummy!!

More soon please! :) Looking forward to meeting Hank.



Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I had such a hard time writing this chapter. Mainly because I wasn't sure if I wanted to go the claiming route, because honestly, I'm still a newcomer when it comes to writing Buffyverse fic. I still don't know all the details about claiming.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2009 - 09:48 pm Title: Staking a Claim

good update. and just to let you know, I found a typo. It's here;

"...one hand clenching in her hair as the other reached down, rubbing her through her jeans. He could already feel the dampness against his fingertips through the lacy garment. “Let’s get you out of these.” His fingers began to draw down her panties..."

What? the jeans just vanished into thin air? :D and also, it doesn't mention when the jeans actually come off, might want to change that.

can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Crap...thanks Anna! I was doing some editing and completely left out that chunk. Will fix it asap. Thanks!

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