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Reviewer: Aibell Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2010 - 04:33 pm Title: Baby Steps

Love this story! I'm reading this for the second time, I'm really hoping that you'll update someday?

One question... how did Spike get into Hank's house without an invite? oh well, I really don't care. this story is far too good to care about small plot holes. goodness knows, the show had a few of them

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 11:58 pm Title: Baby Steps

Interesting talk between Xander and Anya and I can't wait to see how Buffy's chat with Hank goes! Can't wait til the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks! I've actually written Convo #1 with Buffy and Hank. Let's just say...it's lucky for Buffy that she has Spike there. :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 08:00 pm Title: Baby Steps

Travers needs to stop acting irrational and think about what it could do to Dana if he sent her out as an active slayer. I do wonder though if the claim had something to do with this new change in her. Buffy talking to her dad won't be easy hopefully they can fix there issues. I'm glad that Anya and Xander talked and worked out there issues. I have a feeling this wedding won't happen but I hope it does.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! My poor head is spinning from all the stuff I have to work through in this story. Hopefully I can pull it all together! :)

Reviewer: RB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 05:27 pm Title: Baby Steps

Hopefully Hank will step up and, at the very least, take on some financial responsibilty and try to fix his relationship with Buffy and Dawn. I think it would be funny if he found out about Spike's true reason for avoiding sunlight. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really want to try to FIX the relationship between Buffy and her dad. I've been re-watching the series, and I love Buffy's interaction with her dad when he comes to pick her up for the weekend. I would love to try to get them back to some sort of friendly point, but I don't think they could ever be as close as they once were, unless Hank had a really, really good reason!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 03:25 pm Title: Baby Steps

OH OH I think the Dana situation is gonna be more than they can handle. Travers is too confident that these drugs worked. Liked the Anya and Xander convo...she's absolutely right, Buffy and Spike are so much in love and so happy that something has to happen to mess it up, could it be Hank?
Can't wait for Buffy to let Hank have it...he's been an awful father.

Loved it as usual, more soon. =)

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! I'm actually concerned about writing these next chapters, because I thought I knew what I wanted to do, but I'm not so sure anymore!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 11:35 am Title: Baby Steps

Why do I not trust the drug that Travers is using on Dana, I wonder? And Buffy's dad comes home and there's no hug, no fond smile, no warm welcome at all. As he doesn't seem to be feeling affectionate towards his daughters I can't help wondering just why he invited them to stay in the first place......

Author's Response: :) Thanks! Well, all of that will be revealed very soon. Though it's a possibility that the hug didn't come because he's been out of town and needs a shower, or because he's not sure how to act around her.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 11:26 am Title: Baby Steps

So no telepathy (yet) - but but no pain either.
Dana? I don't trust her to be cured all of a sudden.
Xander seems to learn.
LOL and as I feared, Hank has a bad timing ;)
But the meeting was awkward. I hope for Buffy even if things won't get solved (maybe) that she'll get the closure she is looking for and can her (not-parent-)dad behind her.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordykitten! Nope, no telepathy or pain. But who knows what might happen? I'm glad you're enjoying the story, but I have a feeling the next chapter or two is going to be difficult to write, because I thought I had my mind made up about the Hank situation, but now, I'm not so sure.

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/15/2009 - 08:37 am Title: Baby Steps

all i have to say is WOW!! is this ur first story?? cuz it's really good!! i love it! i read it all the way through tonight and can't wait for the next chapter. sorry i didn't comment (believe me! i COMMENT!) but my computer's being wonky and i've been having to refresh a lot. but u've done a wonderful job so far and can't wait for the next chapter!! oh btw, the past couple of chapters, i thought it'd be funny if Spike and Buffy had been in Hank's room the whole time!! LOL

Monica

Author's Response: LOL, thanks Monica! :) It's not my FIRST story for the Buffyverse. I wrote two stories that were multiple chapters, and I wrote two short stories. I've also written over a hundred fan fictions for other shows, like Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman, Friends, and Xena: Warrior Princess. :)

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