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Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2009 - 12:02 am Title: Double Checking

I thought she was going to tell him. I loved the update though and buffy's second opinion,

Author's Response: :) Thanks Jenn!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 11:01 pm Title: Double Checking

Ah Buffy, you little coward. Not telling Spike - I wonder how long she can hide it, especially if she is so moody *g*.
At last Travers isn't forcing Dana to go back - but he wouldn't mind if she did. (He could control her better this way.)
But a good try to let Spike find out by himself ;)

Author's Response: Haha...thanks Cordy! The next chapter might surprise you! :)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 06:18 pm Title: Double Checking

Love this twist with Buffy being pregnant, but please don't let her keep it from Spike too long. Can't wait for more of this!

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! I think Buffy might surprise you!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 05:42 pm Title: Double Checking

I'm starting to become suspicious of Travers and the Watchers Council. Something seems pretty fishy. Dana needs some sort of super psychologist/therapist who knows all about demons because therapy would definitely be helpful. Poor Buffy seems pretty scared. Love the scene where she tests if Spike has super vamp hearing. Happens so often in other stories, it was pretty funny that he didn't hear anything. Can't wait for the next one. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks Demona! Spike might be able to detect the heartbeat later. It's just so early in the pregnancy. I've been researching, and apparently heartbeats can be detected as early as 4 weeks, but I guess not very often. Still...you never know what to expect with a Slayer and a Vampire's child!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 03:19 pm Title: Double Checking

OMG I loved this chappie! So Buffy is really pregnant,but she's totally freaking out. I don't blame her, but she has to tell Spike or he's gonna get upset that she kept it from him, especially if he does hear the baby's heartbeat.
Didn't like Dana's convo with Travers, especially his comments about Spike, it's making me nervous for him.*eep*

Loved this chappie, more when you can and I hope you start to feel better soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Glad you liked the chapter! I'm nearly finished with the next one...don't worry...Spike finds out soon enough!

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 02:16 pm Title: Double Checking

I wish Buffy would just tell Spike already! But I understand the whole scary impossibility of it...so she's forgiven...for now. I liked that Xander's getting better @ being civil to Spike. I'm loving this story and I can't wait for more. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry! Spike finds out soon enough! And I'm glad you're enjoying the nicer side of Xander!

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 01:36 pm Title: Double Checking

aww c'mon! i can't wait for him to find out! this is gonna be great!

Author's Response: : ) Thanks! Spike's finding out is a fun scene...you'll just have to wait and see!

Reviewer: carrot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2009 - 10:07 am Title: Double Checking

Thank you for such a regular updates! Your story is wonderfull and I fell in love with it a bit more with every new chapter/

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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