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Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 06:04 am Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

Travers really knows how to kill two birds with one stone, Dana kills Faith - another slayer is called and then Dana is disposable. Look forward to the wedding in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Vette! Don't count Faith out just yet...she's a strong gal...and maybe what's happening to her will give her some semblance of a clue of how to fix whatever it is they did to Dana. ;)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 01:49 am Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

OMG Poor Dana and poor Faith..Travers needs to get his ass seriously handed to him! What an utter bastard. And now he's controlling Dana, that is not good. *eep* Love the vamp fight, but things are gonna get hard for them I fear. And I can't wait for the wedding...I don't care , make it as sappy and fluffy as you want, cause they deserve it. :)

Can't wait for the next chappie, I lurve this story!

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Yeah, Travers deserves a lot of horrible things, doesn't he? Well...lots more to come soon...so stay tuned!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 01:34 am Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

That sucks that they got Dana and now there going to try and kill Faith. I'm worried about Buffy and the baby I hope that they will be ok and that the counsel won't win.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn....more on that soon! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 11:15 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

Loved the chapters! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: :) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 10:23 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

love it!!!!
i was so sure that faith will get away!! ho well i still trust you ! :) lol

so .. the wedding?! YES!!!!!!!
im so so excited!

cant wait!!



Author's Response: :) Thanks! Yeah, I've been getting some grief for Faith letting Dana into the apartment. But, for all Faith knew, the drug hadn't worked. I mean, the girl shows up frantic, and they don't know exactly what this drug is supposed to do. I guess Faith should have been smarter than to let Dana in, but at the same time, one wouldn't think a shot of something would screw up someone so completely that they'd become a danger. Anyway....more on that soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 09:55 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

grr, i'm yelling the whole time that it's a trap, i thought faith would have been smarter than that. travers needs his ass to be seriously kicked, please let it happen. i know faith doesn't want to kill anymore, but i'd make an exception for him. hopefully dana will come to her senses.

Author's Response: You're right. I kind of cringed writing this chapter, because while my head kept screaming at me that Faith would just get the hell out of dodge, part of me needed her to stay, because as much as Faith is self-serving, she's also not the same girl she was back in Sunnydale. There's a kinship between the two of them because they've both been through a hell of a lot. Anyway...I'm still working out the kinks. More up soon!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 09:39 pm Title: A Slayer's Work is Never Done

Neat - another update :) Good to see.
Too late for Dana... but luckily she has a friend in Faith that cares what happens to her (nobody else is near enough to do something).
Too bad that Dana forgot that Faith is her friend.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! Obviously, Travers is the one perverting the entire Council's name. So he's not going by the book at all. His idea for a little pain-removal was just the beginning. Essentially, what he's doing, is building a Slayer to his liking. Faith's too rebellious, and Buffy is too, in her own way, and Dana's his perfect opportunity to have a Slayer that'll do the things he needs her to do. Of course, this almost automatically spells doom for the Scoobies and for Faith. But that's something that only time will reveal...:)

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