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Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 06:19 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

Great chapter. I like the part where the girl at the store was flirting with Spike right in front of Buffy. Some women are just classless. He is with his pregnant wife that means he is taken. The nerve of some women. I'm surprise that Buffy didn't go all Slayer on the girl. That would have been fun to read. I also like the Spike and Faith fight. I love the couple of scenes that Spike and Faith had on the show.
Also, two thing that I wanted to say. One is that I love that you update fast. That is always great. Second being is that hope you feel better. I didn't read before that you might be going to the hospital. It is good to know that you didn't have to. But I wish you good health.

Author's Response: Thank you! :) Yeah, the woman in the store was pretty class-less. But Buffy knew she didn't have anything to worry about, even if she is a little insecure about her burgeoning belly. :) As for my health, I was up until nearly 4 AM with pains, and I almost gave in and went to the hospital, but then the pain subsided and now I feel ok. I just want to get to Pennsylvania and see my sis and then whatever happens next happens. :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 02:07 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

So cute..loved the visit to the Dr and the shopping spree. Can just see Spike holding her purse.haha. And of course the shopgirl had to flirt with Spike, even with his pregnant wife there.No can resist the hotness that is Spike*smirk* Loved the scene in the cemetery with Faith and the line from S7. Hope Faith doesn't cause trouble for Spuffy when she finds out they're married.

Lovin it as usual. :) Glad you didn't have to go to the hospital and hope you continue to feel better.

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! :) I'm glad you liked the shopping scene! I had fun writing it...especially the 'hot mama' scene. Hehe...:)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 12:39 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

Well, is Faith the good slayer or the bad slayer.. and under whose control?

Enjoying.. you are on a roll.. hope you're feeling better..

Author's Response: Thanks Pam! :) I'm nearly finished with the next chapter. My motivation is to keep my mind off of my illness, so I'm whipping these chapters out, apparently. :)

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 12:20 am Title: It's Been a Long Time

How did I know Faith would come back. I'm glad that Buffy got to Spike in time. Can't wait for Buffy to find out why Faith is there. hope your feeling better.

Author's Response: Thank you, Jenn! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 11:25 pm Title: It's Been a Long Time

Heh - you already have a new chapter :)
Awe :) The shopping was fun till it got interrupted.
Didn't expect Faith to be there already. She didn't recognize Spike, huh?
Hopefully she can convince Buffy and Spike that Dana is in danger / and dangerous now.
Looking forward to more - take care of yourself.

Author's Response: Thanks cordy! Yeah, well Faith and Spike only really had one little encounter, when she was in Buffy's body. But she'll remember him pretty soon. ;) Glad you liked the shopping trip! :)

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