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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2009 - 01:10 pm Title: Get it Done

So it seemed as if Buffy would maybe get used to have Faith there as a back-up. In theory that would be a good thing. But the last part of the chapter? Not so good - but it doesn't show yet who the 'big bad' was that told the Council. Way bad for Buffy.

Author's Response: Thanks Cordy! Actually, I thought I revealed that when Dana was talking to Travers. She was the one who called him. I'll go back and check though.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 04:34 am Title: Get it Done

Travers must be tired of slayers living beyond their teen years to mature to an age where they question the watchers council. Dana is the perfect "lab rat" that he can manipulate to do his dirty work of eliminating slayers that set a bad example to potentials, watchers and slayers who defy his authority. I don't think that Faith is the one who called Travers. I think that the group he sent to Sunnydale to test Buffy have been lurking behind the scenes and had Faith under surveilance and were privy to the conversation between the two slayers. Whether Buffy and company will believe that Faith is not the snitch remains to be seen since it is coincidental that her appearance and the knowledge of her pregnancy coincide. Again, Faith will be tested on her character and whether she thinks she has to prove herself or not, she will need faith to weather the coming storm. Look forward to more, sorry about the long commentaries with each chapter. (Your story brings that out in me).

Author's Response: Hey Vette! Don't apologize for long commentaries...I LOVE THEM! :) You have some awesome observations. The snitch will be explained very soon, and I'm gonna get the story moving along a little faster, I hope. I don't think it'll even get close to 100 chapters, LOL, but I don't want to rule out that possibility quite yet.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 12:56 am Title: Get it Done

*gasp* how did the council find out.... i wonder who the leak is..... update soon i'm sitting on the edge of my seat lol

Author's Response: Hehe...you'll find out very soon! Thanks pixie!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 11:15 pm Title: Get it Done

The only one who knows outside the scoobies is Faith. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks PhotographyNut! You're right...Faith is the only one outside the Scoobies that knows, unless you count Dr. Jones and Wesley. ;)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 10:54 pm Title: Get it Done

*eep* OMG ,now Travers knows about Buffy's pregnancy.I wonder who called him? Hope it wasn't Faith.Didn't sound like her tho. Evil cliffie..

Glad you're feeling better and hopefully it will go away on it's own. =)

Good chappie, more when you can.

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! :) More up soon...

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 08:49 pm Title: Get it Done

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS CAN'T HAPPEN. I don't think it's Faith I think it is someone in the group who you would least suspect.

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Well...more up soon...that's all I can say. :)

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 07:36 pm Title: Get it Done

please tell me that wasn't faith? who else would have found out all that to go squealing to the council? i really hope it wasn't her, i'm trying to somewhat like her in this, and that would make me hate her. i hope nothing happens to the baby, i want travers to get his ass kicked now, he's really pissing me off.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks! Yeah, Travers is quite the wanker, isn't he?

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 07:21 pm Title: Get it Done

Uh-oh! It seems like Faith just did a really bad thing. Then again, her name isn't mentioned so hopefully it's just what you want us to think and maybe it's not her at all. For some reason, I don't see Faith call him 'sir' and Mr Travers, it just doesn't sound like her. Maybe someone was eavesdropping on her and Buffy. Hope so. Can't wait to find out. And I really hope you'll feel better soon. Take care!

Author's Response: Thanks Pet! Well...all I can say is stay tuned! :) You'll find out more soon enough!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:53 pm Title: Get it Done

uh-oh....Faith's up to no good once again. Is it the drugs or just going back to old habits?

Author's Response: Well...I can't say for sure what's goin on yet....

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:48 pm Title: Get it Done

Either Faith is the snitch or Dana was listening...

Gall Bladder.. a pain. Had to back off of fatty meat like hamburgers.. and pork.. never found stones.




Author's Response: Thanks Pam! Yeah, it's really gonna suck having to cut back on all of that. :(

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