OMG.
You need to post soon!!

I'm in love with this story so far!!

Please Hurry!! :)

Author's Response: I plan to update soon. I just had gotten reviews about needing a beta and with betas it takes time for them to read and respond but no worries, I promise more is on the way soon. I have found a beta and I have already sent her the story and hopefully will hear back from her soon. Thanks for reviewing!

I dont mean to be rude or anything just trying to be constructive while critisizing as well. First let me start by saying the storyline is just great! its so awesome that's what kept me reading. Here comes the but's...it seems like i'm reading through sparknotes everything goes by so fast its hard to get attatched to the characters. The writing needs a little gramatical correction and i dont mean just capitalization and punctuation, there is some seriously bad sentance construction and conjugation. do you have a beta? I strongly recomend getting one! I just really want to see this story written to its fullest potential because it really is a good storyline like i said. You have a fan for this story! I just hope you keep my advice in mind!

Author's Response: I don't have a beta but I did contact two from the beta list on here today hoping to find one. I'm new here and only joined two days ago so I wasn't even aware of betas being offered until today. I didn't add anymore to the story hoping one of them would get back to me. And about the spark notes, I could see why you say that. She's going from one place to another but never really getting involved in either. I'll see if I can perhaps do something about that in the chapters to come that might help a bit. Thanks for reading and reviewing!