Reviews For Whispering Devil
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Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2009 - 03:02 am Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

I like the dialogue, good show voice.

Author's Response: Thanks, writing dialogue is actually my favourite thing to do. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 06:38 pm Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

Poor Buffy, it must be really confusing for her. Great update!

Author's Response: I know it must be very confusion. Aww, poor Buffy. Thanks.

Reviewer: laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2009 - 08:08 am Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

I know, I want to know what's wrong with Buffy?

Author's Response: It'll explain. Someday. A few chapters from now, we'll find out why she can read his thoughts. We've gotta keep some intrigue though. Thanks!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 - 11:10 pm Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

Great update! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2009 - 12:11 am Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

That was funny i l oved it. this is going to be very intteresting.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I hope it stays funny and interesting for you, poppet.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2009 - 11:16 pm Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

i kind of wish this was in the 5th season after spike realized his feelings for her, so his thoughts wouldn't be all about killing her and hatred, even though she's a bit of a pain here. i didn't really start to like spike until after he fell for buffy.

Author's Response: Well, Spike's thoughts eventually stop being violent. Hopefully that doesn't bother you too much; the wait, I mean. He does fall for her in my story. Thank you for giving my story a chance, even though it's in season 4.

Reviewer: ii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2009 - 11:00 pm Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

Very realistic Spike, though I can't help but hope he thinks of something way too soft or sweet for the Big Bad ever to admit to while he doesn't know Buffy can hear him. Wonder if thoughts of draining and thoughts of shagging will switch around?
Great chapter, liked the interaction between Spike and Buffy and how believable it is from what we saw on the show.


Author's Response: Ah, yes. Those too-sweet thoughts will start seeping in. He's still William, after all--deep down inside. The question is, how deep? He will think nice thoughts, but this is Spike we're talking about so violence and blood will also be a part of his thinking process. Thanks for your review.

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Date: 01/18/2009 - 10:50 pm Title: Penny For Your Thoughts?

Sounds like a one-way-street - Spike can't hear Buffy's thoughts at all?
Enjoyed the update :)
Looking forward to more - what Buffy will do with her new discovery.

Author's Response: It is a one-way street--she can only hear his thoughts. He cannot hear hers. And Buffy will be doing something with her discovery soon. Thanks for the review.

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