Date: 03/07/2009 - 09:38 am Title: Part One
I have to say you bring a lot of good observations to the table. I love the" three things she offered" line. It is effective, characteristic of spike, and packs punch. I also like how you get in Buffy's head. It seems to flow well. I often find that, especially in season 6 and 7 fics, I can't picture buffy saying or doing what she does, but this one works. Although I will say i wasn't expecting her to sleep in the same bed as spike.
What really, really put this fic over the top, though, was Dawn's insight into how her sister was acting, and tying it back to Joyce. That shows you really have a feel for the show in general and all the characters. Shows a lot of thought on your part.
Date: 02/16/2009 - 05:35 am Title: Part One
The little things are really what make them believable. The fact that she does fall asleep beside the vicious kill that he supposedly is. The unstated trust that has developed into just a bit more. Beautiful.
Date: 01/31/2009 - 11:50 am Title: Part One
This is a wonderful first chapter. Your writing is very good. I look forward to reading more.
Date: 01/27/2009 - 10:39 pm Title: Part One
I really liked this! Can't wait to read the next chapter :o)
Date: 01/27/2009 - 10:03 pm Title: Part One
Now that's much more like it should have been. He deserves to have his injuries treated as much as any of them, and I'm so glad your Buffy had the courage of her convictions to stay with him. Giles isn't going to like it though....
Date: 01/27/2009 - 03:13 am Title: Part One
This is absolutely perfect and I loved it. I can NOT wait until the next chapter. Please continue.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 10:15 pm Title: Part One
Really love this! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 01/25/2009 - 06:49 pm Title: Part One
Love this! Please don't let Buffy listen to her friends! Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 05:29 pm Title: Part One
This is beautiful... I really like it.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 04:42 pm Title: Part One
Okay , this chapter made me cry , and it's only the first . I just know she's gonna cave into her friends, especially Giles and stupid Zander (Hated them on the show almost as much as Angel) I hope she doesn't , waiting to read more , i hope soon.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 01:27 pm Title: Part One
Wonderful start, loved the chapter.
And Spike's POV (voice).
Date: 01/25/2009 - 10:42 am Title: Part One
Awesome start! Plus Great insight on Buffy and Spike's thoughts!!!! Poor Spike though, but it's SO sweet on how Buffy's caring for him! :) I definitely Can't Wait to read more to see what happens next!!!! So please keep up the Awesome work, and Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!
Take Care, Amber :)
Date: 01/25/2009 - 07:53 am Title: Part One
Lovely, More please.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 04:42 am Title: Part One
Great start! Can't wait to see where you take this. Of course Buffy is still worried about what her friends think. :( Liked that she stayed with him in the basement.
More soon please! =)
Date: 01/25/2009 - 03:34 am Title: Part One
That was amazing. I loved it and i can't wait to see what happends next.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 03:18 am Title: Part One
This is the moment I wished for Spike. Lovely writing.
Date: 01/25/2009 - 02:37 am Title: Part One
excellent...please continue