Date: 02/16/2009 - 05:52 am Title: Part Three
Always a pair, even if imperfect. Hope she can convince him, not that I've any doubt. Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
Date: 02/14/2009 - 06:42 pm Title: Part Three
Really good chapter. Can't wait for the next. :)
Date: 02/12/2009 - 08:33 am Title: Part Three
Wow. His pain is so real, so tangible, as are Buffy's emotions. Awesome writing. Great chapter!
Date: 02/12/2009 - 02:24 am Title: Part Three
wonderful sweety, I love it.
Date: 02/12/2009 - 01:52 am Title: Part Three
I really hate that bathroom to. I'm glad Buffy has the attitude she does about the whole situation though. Update again soon ,really enjoying.
Date: 02/12/2009 - 12:35 am Title: Part Three
I feel bad for both of them. They hurt each other without meaning to. Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 02/11/2009 - 10:11 pm Title: Part Three
Mmmm very important talk Buffy had with Spike. Hopefully Spike will believe Buffy that he can be of help for her.
Important chapter too, spuffywise.
Date: 02/11/2009 - 06:06 pm Title: Part Three
Very promising. I love that you let them explore their deeper fears and tangled emotions. Too many authors just solve any problem between them with sexual attratction. I also think your somewhat vulnerable Spike seems very true. Can't wait to see more of this and how the Scoobies and girls react to Spike in your story.
Date: 02/11/2009 - 09:58 am Title: Part Three
I like that this is addressed. Especially because I read a lot of fics where it never occurs to anyone what happened in that bathroom. Some they have sex in the bathroom set after that happened with no acknowledgment. It bugs me. Also I like that Buffy doesn't blame herself or make it her fault. I hate when people blame Buffy because she treated Spike poorly. Still doesn't excuse rape.
Also I'm longwinded but I like this story so far. Keep it up!
Date: 02/11/2009 - 03:13 am Title: Part Three
Wonderful update. I think Buffy and Spike needed this moment of honesty and I liked that Buffy didn't brush off Spike's admission of hurting her. It's a reality that can't be pushed aside, but it's one they can work past and it's looking like they're both at that place. Looking forward to more.
Date: 02/11/2009 - 02:10 am Title: Part Three
That was an emotional and gutwrenching chapter. They need to have this convo to move on. Both are so heartbroken:(
Great chappie, more soon please.=)
Date: 02/11/2009 - 01:49 am Title: Part Three
That was emotional but they both need to get passed this. great update can't wait for more.