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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 14: Trauma

Oh my, the rest of the shower wasn't so sexy with Buffy running again. If if hadn't been for Spike rescuing her again she would have been dead, dying gladly.

Author's Response: Buffy is great at running isn't she?

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 13: Preparations

Ah Spike explained. Hopefully Buffy won't forget. Sexy shower :D

Author's Response: I love sexy showers *grins*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter 12: Destiny

Mmmh so the main reason Buffy was crying so much was this situation - and not being wanted, not even by Spike.

Author's Response: I'm sure she has a lot on her mind. She's probably crying for everything and anything. Poor girl had alot to go through the last few weeks. I haven't updated more yet. Still waiting on the beta but I'll send her an email to see how she's doing and how the betaing is going. DId update the other story though :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2009 - 11:14 am Title: Chapter 11: Morning After

Ah the morning after. Buffy reacted not so well but hopefully crying will help her, once she is done with the crying.

Author's Response: Yea sometimes someone just has to cry and get it out of their system. She hadn't been crying since the first day or so. She's probably way overdue for a good healing cry.

Reviewer: Willow Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter 10: Hard Decisions/Good Results

nicely done update soon. Cant wait to read more.....oo0o and the bit of smutt in this chap was gr8

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. More was updating. Hope you enjoy that as well!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 10: Hard Decisions/Good Results

Ah look there, I didn't expect Buffy to be so thoughtful to offer her blood. And what a sexy way to give the blood and receive. :)
Looking forward to more, the last two chapters were new to me.

Author's Response: Glad they were new. It will be new from now on. No more deleting of old chapters, I promise. I agree with you about the blood. It was great but I think guilt can motivate a person to do things they normally wouldn't do. Plus have him feed on someone else or feed on her...I'm sure feeding on her seems lesser of the two evils.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 9: On the Road Again

*nods* Bagging it will definitely go better with Buffy. I wonder what they'll do in this city now.

Author's Response: I enjoy going new places. I sort of made this one up myself.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 8: Spread Some Hope

(And still, I'm sure I've even read these chapters here before. Did you delete the first posted ones?)
And good that Spike was there; Kim would have robbed Buffy if it hadn't been for him.
Sad for Buffy to leave the cat behind, he became a friend for her. Kim is too new for her.
If Spike continues feeding it will cause a problem with Buffy I fear.

Author's Response: I had posted 1-5 possibly 6 a while ago. When a beta picked me up, she requested I delete the story and restart from scratch only posting when she finished a chapter. I listened and deleted the story. So there were rewritten parts and parts added in the new rewritten chapters. I have another beta now who isn't as strict about that kind of thing but hopefully she stands by me so this story will be posted as betaed rather than as written. Sorry you had to reread it. (it was Kim hitting on Spike in the previous version)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 7: Story Time

Apparently Lucky didn't like Spike (or just doesn't like vampires).
But it went well, wasn't sure how welcome Spike would be.
I liked Spike's back story.

Author's Response: I think the whole vampire roaring thing upset him. I wouldn't like someone who roared at my door either. Poor Lucky.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lucky Breaks

Seems that this is the day to get found :)

Author's Response: Spike and Buffy seemed to agree *Grins*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2009 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter 5: Lost

Seems I missed a chapter or my review didn't get through.
Buffy could use the working overtime, the tips will help her to get some food if needed before she gets the paycheck.
Saving the children was a plus even if she had to go back to be the slayer.

Author's Response: I couldn't imagine Buffy ignoring children. She will always be a slayer even when she's retired or protesting. It's just in her heart and blood.

Reviewer: Lanea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2009 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 5: Lost

I really like your characterization of Buffy in this story. And watching Spike begin to feel compassion but still casually feed is a really interesting juxtaposition that highlights his complexity. The image of Spike hijaking the father with two strollers makes my stomach churn and paints such a stark contrast to his interior thoughts and feelings.
I'm really interested to see where you take this story line. I vote for updates.

Author's Response: He was still evil. I wanted to portray an image of what he was prior to his change over to good. It was the least evil thing I could have him do especially since Dru ran away so the feeding never took place. No worries about making your stomach churn anymore. I think that's pretty much the worst thing that Spike does in this flick. I'm not big on the whole eating people thing..

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 4: Where to Start

I'm a bit confused - didn't you have more chapters before?

*checks* Yeah, I remember having read this one before :)

Author's Response: There were 5 chapters posted at one point. The beta asked me to remove them and to post the new updated versions. By this weekend, there will probably be brand new chapters you haven't seen before. So after chapter 5 is where you want to read once she reads those so I can post them :)

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2009 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter 3: New Beginnings

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3 execellent chapters. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'll update soon but probably not tonight. I'm updating four chapters on another story I'm working on but I'm so glad you're loving it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: New Beginnings

Ah so Spike will search for Buffy; I've read a store once where Spike did that (sadly still a WIP).
Looking forward to read more about Spike's adventures finding Buffy.

Author's Response: This one will be finished. Updates will follow soon. Probably not tonight though, sorry. Did update the other story quite a bit though. Hope you are enjoying it so far and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 2: How to Live With Your Actions

Lucky was my last cat's name too :)
(PS dyed =/= died)

Author's Response: Aww, yea I've never had a cat but Lucky just fit that so perfectly :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1: Hiding

Oh you already posted several chapters! I have to hurry to catch up again :)

Author's Response: Yea I usually post a few chapters at a time. I have someone reading them so as they return them I post them. Won't be updating tonight though, sorry. Perhaps tomorrow. :)

Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 3: New Beginnings

oh..how 'nice' of spike to volunteer to look for buffy :D ...

i hope he'll realize that Dru's not worth it and just move on---move on to Buffy! hehehe...

Author's Response: Yea Dru is definitely moving past him it seems. I think Spike has a nice soft spot for mums in general. Thanks for the review and hope you enjoy the story!

Reviewer: spuffy chick Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 1: Hiding

yay! a new story!

poor buffy...she's feeling so desolate.

Author's Response: Yea killing someone you love must be hard. Thanks for the review and hope you enjoy it! i got another story coming soon to after it's read!

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2009 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 3: New Beginnings

wow that was awesome i loved it. spike offering to help find buffy is interesting but good. can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Glad you seem to be enjoying it so far. Thanks so much for the review. It's great to know people are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2009 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Hiding

I read the first two lines and my only comment to you is get a Beta reader who knows about grammar. You need to beef up your writing as well. Instead of just matter of factly stating what happened, you need to weave an actual concept and plot so that we can begin to care what happens. It sounds like you have a good idea, but your writing is not up to par.

Author's Response: Well Chapter one is now beta-ed but I'm still not sure you will like it. She moved a lot of things and redid a few things but the plot is still the same. Hopefully the results of the betaing helps!

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