[Report This]Date: 04/02/2009 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I love the way you showed how Spike is still very much the gentleman despite his immature behavior in the past (chucking casino chips). He wants Buffy, but wants her fully lucid when they do the deed. They are definitely playing a dangerous game of "let's not get caught" with the unintentional sleepover. I can't wait to see Spike filming the meet the family week. I'm sure he'll find a way to ingratiate himself with Joyce and Dawn, if she's in the story.
Author's Response: Thank you. Dawn will be there, but Joyce has passed away, so she won't be. Well, she could b ethere as a ghost, but ... LOL
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2009 - 11:17 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
woooohooooo MORE MORE MORE please!! I love this :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2009 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
AHHHH! Hometown dates! I'm so excited! Dawn did warn Buffy that she had to make it this far. I'm just hoping that Dawn and Spike get to meet. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, Dawn gets her wish. :) And thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I liked learning more back story about how Spike came to be in Los Angeles and his cooled singing career. i can see how his manager and girlfriend's cheating would sour him on the music. Spike's chivalrous conduct with a drunken Buffy makes me like him even more. The inadvertent first night together was charming.
Spike trying to will Angel into giving the rose to Lilah was funny. Poor guy, he's going to have to endure his girl going out with the big pillock. Again! At least Spike will get to meet the family, too. That should be fun!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I'm still loving this fic! :)
Author's Response: :) I'm so glad that you are. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Spike won't be too happy that Angel will be meeting Buffy's family! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: That he won't. :) Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Awe :) Drunken Buffy was indeed cute but Spike was the perfect gentleman. Though I feared Spike was in trouble now, being late for his meeting - good to see he was lucky.
Uh-huh... Meeting the families? Sounds as if it will get interesting in the next chapters (not that it wasn't before). :D
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. I hope you enjoy the next few chapters.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 02:01 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
AWW I love Spike being a gentleman and not taking advantage of Buffy while she was so drunk. So cute when B admitted she liked him and wouldn't regret anything. :) And Spike knows that Buffy is staying to help Faith.
Can't wait for the hometown date...Dawn will probably be really into it.
Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 11:28 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Great chapter, loved the interaction between drunk Buffy and slightly tipsy Spike. Glad they didn't get caught by anyone other than Faith! Meeting the families should be interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Enjoyed..
Author's Response: Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 09:34 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Brilliant chapter, glad Buffy and Spike got some alone time, even tho she was very drunk lol, looking forward to next chapter :-)
Author's Response: :) Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Love the new chapter. I love the developments between Spike and Buffy. I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2009 - 05:14 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
I am so glad that Spike didn't take advantage when she was drunk. I was worried they would sleep together and that regrets would be had in the morning, luckily that didn't happen. I love how sweet Spike is being right now, but I can feel his frustration. I'm praying with every chapter that Faith wins...lol!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you like my characterization of Spike. And that you are invested in the surrounding story of the Bachelor. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2009 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Buffy's flirting more and more openly, so Spike's song was a perfect fit. The single room and a tipsy Buffy are mighty tempting. Too bad it seems Angel has figured out that he's got some competition!
Author's Response: Yes, it's tempting. :) Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2009 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh, boy! Spike has made his intentions known and Angel's got a clue. Your Spike is possessive yet really sweet. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: :) Thank you, Lori.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2009 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
finish this story please...it's sooo good!
Author's Response: :) Thank you. I will finish it. In fact, it's complete in rough draft form. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
aww that chapter was good, great song choice for Spike, can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Loving this fic! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
This is absolutely my favorite story. I love Spike's jealousy - I can't wait until Angel gives Buffy the card for the overnight date. Please don't wait too long for more chapters!
Author's Response: I'm flattered that you like my story this much. Thank you for reading! I'll try to keep the updates coming quickly. The chapters are written and I post as soon as I get one back from the last beta. *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Geez, so Darla stufed her ex into a freezer? Ugh. I liked the scenes in the hotel, that's different. And I loved,loved,loved the ending. Spike singing that song was amazing, and it looks like Angel is noticing something between S and B. And our Miss Buffy is in deep now. hehe.
Can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the change of scenery with the Hotel. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Ho boy. Angel suspects something. But yay that Buffy is totally on board with the Spike loving. I mean seriously, who could resist? Love it!
Author's Response: Not I. Spike is irresistible. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter, Angel doesn't like the fact that Spike upstaged him, huh?
I like that they've moved to the Hyperion and the crew are living there too... opportunity for some shenanigans perhaps?
Looking forward to more ^_^
Author's Response: :) Shenanigans: I love that word. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
*shudders* Just you buy something and find a frozen (or not so frozen body) in there.
Enjoyed your new chapter - things are a little bit different now at the hotel. First time too that the cast and the crew could sit together. Loved Spike singing too :)
But maybe Angel suspects something after the song now. Anyway it should be worth it - Buffy was impressed :)
Author's Response: :) Yes, it would be awful to find a body like that. This has actually happened here locally a couple of years ago. The story was so insane that it stuck with me all this time and I used it here.
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
*squeals* EXCELLENT! I love this story so much, can't wait for the next update. :D Great job, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and leaving such an enthusiastic review. It made my day!
[Report This]Date: 03/28/2009 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Uhoh. I smell jealousy.
Good work! More please!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you very much.
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