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Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 - 03:56 pm Title: Clarity

Ok, so I have to admit that I was hesitant about reading this story. I have never read a crossover story because I thought that it would take away from the amazingness that is the Joss-verse. However, the summary for your story caught my interest. I'm impressed with what you have done so far and how you have used the storylines of both for your own purposes. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but overall it is a great start!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 08:35 pm Title: Clarity

what a perfect twist! Bella's voice seems very real in this chapter, and Edward's discovering he had a demon with a primitive love for Bella was cool. Can't wait to read more !

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope to have more soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 06:02 pm Title: Clarity

Mmmh the one was Oz but who was the other man.... Ah Wesley. A watcher should be helpful. :))
And a free head-porn for Edward. Gave him some ideas, can't hurt for later. *grins*
Eden? Wonder what more Wesley has to tell them.

Author's Response: The head porn will probably be very helpful *winks* LOL. Don't worry I'll try not to keep you waiting to long.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 04:31 pm Title: Clarity

Just caught up with this story.. absolutely wonderful! Love that you've brought Oz in. I still know nothing of the 'Twighlight' world, but it sounds fascinating. Can't wait for more...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'll try to have more soon.

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 01:12 pm Title: Clarity

Great chapter, Angelina.

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 03:22 am Title: Clarity

EEEK Edward got a taste of Spike's lust crazed demon! Hahahahaha! Uh, Buffy? Uh Spike? Did anyone tell you that possible indecent exposure will lead to - I don't know OTHERS watching LMAO! That would have been so uncool if they were at it like bunnies (sorry Anya) when others were watching - oh wait weren't they almost doing just that? Seriously though they must love PDA(Sex) lol! Anywho...Love the update Angelina! Hmmm Wesley the ghost bet Spikey is loving that lol! More Angelina so gonna beg you now...Do I get a sugarless cookie or hey what about a diabetic cookie? Yeah I'm rambling and dieting what else is new in this horribly fast food industrial world, and no that's not funny even though I'm laughing at the world...Bad world no tea and cakes for you....Ok wonderful update and yes I am soooo overly tired! Hugsssss!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks for all your help! I'm glad you liked it. Of course anything for you. lol

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 02:11 am Title: Clarity

Hmm, what kind of cookie???

This, omg, this chapter was just amazing!! OMG, OZ!! and OMG Wes!! *squeeee!!* I was just wondering the other day when I would see another update for this. I can't wait to see what unfolds from all of this. I totally loved it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! You are so awsome. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2009 - 02:10 am Title: Clarity

Interesting development. Only evil is what lays in the heart of man. But how does that explain vampires and wolves...can't wait to find out what you make of it.

Author's Response: I promise, I will explain on the next chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: stephan grimes Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2009 - 08:47 am Title: Truths

dude that is a kick ass story!! how the hell did you come up with all that shit, and when are you going to write more??? love ya hun!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2009 - 08:43 am Title: Truths

dude how the hell did you come up wit all that?? but that is a kick ass story when are you going to write the rest??

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 10:10 pm Title: Truths

Enjoyed the update. :)
So it was a decoy in Rome... because Buffy 'retired'. If she had only knew. Ah well, hindsight.
To see Oz was unexpected ~ because of the wolves (the pack)?

Author's Response: Yep, I always thought Oz needed a home... I wont tell you but, Oz plays a big role with the pack.

Reviewer: Jake Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 08:51 pm Title: The End

Whoa! I'm intrigued! Keep this one going, please.

Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it. Dont worry I'm hoping to have more up next week.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 08:38 pm Title: Truths

OZ! I can't wait to find out whats up with Wes and Oz.

Author's Response: LOL, dont worry I wont keep you hangin to long.

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 02:24 pm Title: Truths

I'm not the biggest Twilight fan (don't really like it, to be honest!) but your summary intrigued me and I was curious to see how a Buffy/Twilight crossover would work.

Well, you've got me hooked on your story :D Very interesting how you've worked the slayer mythology around the Twilight-verse, and so far you seem to have taken some of the things I really hate about Twilight and altered them so I don't mind them so much.

Interesting to see Oz and Wes turn up at the end there... wonder what's going on? Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: I am so glad you like espacially since you don't like twilight. I never liked how whiny Bella was, my intention for this storie is to make her stronger. Thanks for your wonderful review.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 02:07 pm Title: Truths

Nice surprise of Oz. I really like how you're moving this story forward, though I was worried for a moment the teenager wolves were going to peep on Buffy/Spike sex. eww.

eagerly looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad you like it. Yah figured I coundn't let them get to far, dont want to corrupte the teenagers.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 11:29 am Title: Truths

What an evil place to stop! *pout* No more chapters to read. Please, please, please post more soon, I can't wait for more of this story. I absolutely love it!

Author's Response: LOL, I'll post soon I promise.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 11:16 am Title: Getting There

I'm definitely hooked by this story. It's really, really good! I'm so glad I still have 3 chapters left to read. :)

Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad I was able to hook you.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 11:05 am Title: More Questions Than Answers

Just started reading this story and had to stop and let you know how much I enjoy it so far. On to the next chapter... :)

Author's Response: I'm am so glad you like it. I really enjoy reading your stories so you can imagine how much you reviewing means to me. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2009 - 07:16 am Title: Truths

Can I just say I should be in bed right now lol. Yup nearly 315 am and has to be at work in oh less than 5 hours. Guess sleeping during the day didn't help...

Can I just say at the end of your last chapter it was heartbreaking and then to have Spike totally wrenching his heart out to the sky in pain...was Ok can I stop sobbing right now? Sometimes I want to say good Buffy feel his pain, but then I remember that these two are so incredibly alike with how everyone just manipulated their lives and its heart wrenching and painful! The pain is exquisite hun. I loved this. What confused me was the part where Alice says their future disappears. I know she knows things but then the end is what made me question that even more. It seems like Wes is coming through by bringing in Oz and can I say YEAH to that! I'm sure its to help with the wolf problem...So then why does Alice say their future disappears? Cuz then wouldn't that indicate that Oz is very much there to keep their future from not disappearing? Then again we are looking at Buffy and Spike who now have had freaking sex while Wes pops in with Oz so I'm thinking anyone coming along to interrupt will be definitely slayed to some degree lol...I love the update Angelina! I was just confused by that one sentence. Everything else was amazing! I was actually like ok more now damnit! I have read some pretty lame Xovers with Twilight and this by far is the best out there. Keep it up! Now I have ranted and now I think I should sleep a bit lmao....MORE updates more updates....ok pretty please! Hugggzzzz

Author's Response: Ok sweetie for that line that you didn't understand. Alice can basically see anyone future if she knows them and she's looking. The Quileute pack of werewolves are the acception to the rule. They believe it is because they are vampires natural enemys and it gives them a advantage against them. Anyway when bella or anybody is around the pack there futures disapear as well. Because she cannot see the packs future so if someone is close enough to them there futures disapeare as well. I hope that answers your question. I'm glad you loved the chappter and I am hoping to get updates out quicker. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Madeline Black Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2009 - 08:19 am Title: Telling

Oh My God.

This Story Is Amazing So Far.

Plese, Please, Plese, Please Hurry Up And Submit Next Chapter!

I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!

Author's Response: More will be coming soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 - 09:01 am Title: Telling

Good to see an update :)
A lot for Spike to take in... hopefully running away will help him to accept what happened. Especially when he comes back; I think he worried Buffy now.

Author's Response: Don't worrie there wont be much angst between out favorite cupple for much longer. In my eyes there always eternal. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: msspikester Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2009 - 04:41 am Title: Telling

I am a huge Twilight fan, so I was thrilled when I began reading your story. Love the way you made it an alternate dimension to explain the differences between Twilight's vampires and Buffy's vampires. The culmination of the battle on Buffy's world was saddening, but necessary for your storyline. I am looking forward to more of this!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing and I am so glad that you feel that way. More will be coming soon.

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2009 - 06:14 am Title: Pain and Self-Reflection

awesome idea and I love where it is going so far. Sorry the review is so short, Im kinda pressed for time atm. Know I love it and can't wait to read more though ok?

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it and don't worry more will be coming soon. Thank for the review.

Reviewer: D Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2009 - 01:34 am Title: Pain and Self-Reflection

WOW katie! Great writing. I haven't read Twilight, but Megan has given me a once-over about the characters, I really like this story. Can't wait for the next chapters (hurry up!) j/k ; )

Reviewer: meg Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/28/2009 - 01:30 am Title: Pain and Self-Reflection

I am so impressed Katie. I luv the story... I was sorta blushing when Buffy was telling Edward about the claim- I forgot it was the last chapter, so when I got to the end I was totally bummed! Keep writing- I can't wait to see where the story goes!!!

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