Date: 02/16/2009 - 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good start! William stories are always fun :) I really like the artist thing too, I hope there's some nude sketching coming up ;) I felt kind of sad for William, though he seems content with his life (with the exception of not knowing the girl), but he needs something to shake the hell outta his paradigm. I'm sure that he will soon! :D
Date: 02/16/2009 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Spike is infatuated with a girl he's never talked to. Wonder if he ever plans to meet her, somewhere other than his dreams. Am looking forward to where this goes. Please, update soon.
Date: 02/16/2009 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. I don't think I've seen any with William running an upscale business like this. I like it.
Date: 02/14/2009 - 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like the start :) And I'll be looking out for updates for this one.
Date: 02/14/2009 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful start! I look forward to reading more!
Date: 02/14/2009 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1
OOh Deb, I cant wait for the next chapter :) Sweet begining . Well Done.
Date: 02/13/2009 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Don't worry about the wait I can tell it will be worth it!
Date: 02/13/2009 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved it, great start.
more please
Date: 02/13/2009 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter. Looking forward to more.
Date: 02/13/2009 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far. It sounds really interesting. I love stories where Spike/William is an artist. Just something about Spike/William being an artist is hot. Probably because it has me thinking about his fingers and what they can do in other areas. LOL Was that too much information :) I also like that you have Spike and Xander as friends. I love Spuffy stories where Spike and Xander are friends. I don't mind if they don't get along in stories or if the author makes Xander the bad guy. But it feels good to read something where they are friends. Keep up the great work.
Date: 02/13/2009 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it, sounds like you are setting the mood and stage for a good story.