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Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 9

Huh? WTF? I expected her to meet William, maybe, but Dru? Why? Did you skip over time, was the first 9 chappies flashbacks or something? Surely she's not gonna give Wm's folder to Dru?
I can understand not showing her hand, but why didnt Buffy tell Angel how she felt about going to the party and clearing up that she'd had misconceptions about the type of party it was--because apparently he had misunderstood her knowledge of this type of swing party--- ie swing/swing dancing vs swinger & swingers!
He's at fault for being the lying cheating POS that Angel almost indubitably is, she's at fault a) for not ascertaining exactly what kind of event she was going to in the first place, and b) at least for not owning up to her naievetee' initially, not to mention her objections after-the-fact.
I adore your William so far. You've just gotta love a shy William. (So long as this is honestly his character and not an act...?) Did you say what exactly he does for a living, or is he a trophy hubby? I figured he, too, was a power-hubby until I read how you characterized him so far.
Well, I'm well and truly hooked. I started and read all 9 chappie so far tonight...time while reading the flew by and too soon I was at the end to date, left wanting MORE!
~~Kara

Author's Response: Ya...i was expecting her to meet William too...but i changed my mind at the last minute and i hope i don't regret it. No, she's not going to give Dru William's folder. Buffy doesn't want to give Dru anything...maybe a slap on the cheek. No, the first 9 chapters weren't fashbacks...I'll say 'flashback' if needed. The thing about Buffy not talking to Angel about the party was basically b/c her embarrassment for confusing what she was attending. Buffy at this point is torn--should she yell at him b/c of this one time thing, this misunderstanding that she didn't talk with him about and stop him, or is there more to the story? She needs more facts. William is a gentle for sure. I didn't say waht his job is...all you know is that he was in a band and that he writes. More to come on his daily life style. He defiantly isn't the trophy hubby....well not in Dru's eyes that is. Before I starting writing this I had to decide if William/Spike was going to a swinger like the rest or the guy I turned out writing about now...I decided to make him like Buffy...they could see eye to eye and connect on this level---they both are having trouble giving up on their spouse. Thanks for the review and hope you enjoy more. :)

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter 9

I just found this wonderful story! Interesting plotline and a tricky little cliffhanger in this chapter.

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you found it too :) It was buried under many recently updated stories and I'm happy to see their are seekers. :)

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 9

ooooohhhhhhh. I can't wait for more, more, more!

Author's Response: It's coming...slowly...but it still is coming. I have not forgotten about this while still doing my stupid school work...even though that should be my #1 priority....oh well...

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 9

Uhoh. I smell trouble. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Trouble just keeps coming. :)

Reviewer: moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 9

uuuuuuuuuuuuuupdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!^^

Author's Response: It's posted :) Enjoy and tell me what ya like...or don't like.

Reviewer: Klara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter 9

Hello DRU....??? *Groans* that is evil cliffhanger. Love it as always, and biting my nails off while waiting for next chapter.

Author's Response: Ya...i'm bumped too that it's dru...hehe...you were expecting Will huh? Well, don't worry he's coming...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 9

Why would Buffy want to talk to Dru about?? Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: You'll see.

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 9

Hmm...now what could this meeting be about? I'm intrigued...and worried!

Author's Response: Well the girls are certainly not getting together to swap Angel sex stories...

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 9

Interesting that Buffy and Dru are meeting up, whoever prompted the get together has something they need to get off their chest. So, will Dru approach Buffy about William or Angel? Should be telling on what she wants to discuss with the wife of the man she has used as a lover and confidant. Buffy, on the other hand, has the opportunity to tell Dru that the party took her unawares considering that neither Angel nor Dru had prepared her for the "theme" of the social event. Whether they discuss issues based on their marriage or their difference of lifestyles should be interesting in showing what is important to each woman. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: This was Buffy's little idea to get together with Dru. She'll defiantly be regretting soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 9

Interesting...I am curious what Buffy's thoughts on Williams story was and what the heck are Buffy and Dru meeting for?

Author's Response: Well the girls are not going out for coffee that is for sure. The contents of Will's story will be coming up in ch.11.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh, what an evil place to leave it! I want to know what Buffy's going to say - more soon, please!!

Author's Response: Ya...I'm a bit evil. But i updated so I guess that cancels out the evil....well maybe...

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:02 am Title: Chapter 9

hmmmmmm, verrrrry interesting. :) Still reading, still enjoying, still intrigued.

Author's Response: thanks :)

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