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Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2009 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter 11

Glad to see the update

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 11

Buffy and Spike really need each other. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Yep, they need one another to become stronger and become the person that they want to be.

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 11

When William dragged Buffy to the stacks I thought, "Oh My!" but sadly realized it was too early for spuffy sex and recognized that you had everything well-in-hand--they needed privacy to whip out their insecurities and pain. It was heartbreaking to read William's reaction to what he thought was Buffy's rejection of his writing. You write such lovely angst.

Author's Response: Ya....i wanted to make Buffy kiss him too but if she did she would just be using William and we can't have that now can we? More coming soon. Thanks lori.

Reviewer: NeomBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 11

Ever your faithful reader. Each chapter is like a little morsel, kind of a little tease, just enough happens to move the plot forward a tiny bit. I'm almost wish there were a little more in each chapter, but this definitely does keep me on my toes waiting for the next chapter. I guess it's up to your artistic license ;). I love this story though and the idea of these two people stuck in hurtful relationships helping each other out of it. I also really liked in this chapter in particular that Buffy owned up to not being completely honest but having a good reason for it.

As always, thank you for writing this beautiful story!

Author's Response: Awww....i love faithful readers. :) Makes me feel all nice and warm inside. I'm sorry if i tease...i want to update as soon as i can but i have other things to do so its hard to pick a spot where to stop. More to come soon, especially Buffy and William scenes.

Reviewer: flyingnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 11

love it!!!!

Author's Response: Glad you did

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter 11

Working at a library seems very appropriate for William. A far cry from the punker he started out as. Very symbolic that he is surrounded by wisdom but has to remain muted and hushed within its boundaries. Buffy seeking out the only other person who can identify with her predicament seeking advice or just solace is touching. William has lived & re-lived the whole spectrum of denial, self-loathing, anger and helpless-hopelessness but he may not be capable of assuaging Buffy's wounded emotions since he is unable to leave his wife. How can William convince Buffy to leave Angel when he is incapable of leaving Drusilla. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Ya...William and the library is defiantly opposite from where he's been. I wanted his work to be something he enjoys and looks forward to...his safe haven. However, all these creative minds surrounding him is intimidating too. It's kind of like a Good Willing Hunting sort of thing. And you pointed out the major problem at the moment....how can they help each other when they can't seem to help themselves? More to come. Thanks for reviewing.

Author's Response: Correction, Good Will Hunting.

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