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Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 8

Well, I guess midnight brings out the writer in you. haha I love this story. I always look forward to it. My heart breaks for them both but especially Spike. He seems so lost and broken. William is such a sweetheart and deserves to be love but he seem like he deserves more than Dru. He deserves a whole lot more. He can back to singing if he wants to. Also, he is a writer so he can try to sell his work. I love stories when they have Spike/William as a writer or singer. You have him as both so that is double the goodness. Please update when you can.

Author's Response: Indeed it does. :) I'm a night time girl. Ya, Will needs love. Buffy needs faithfulness. They need each other.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter 8

I love how Buffy is seeing that Spike has no confidence in any of his accomplishments and she is being gentle to him.

Author's Response: Buffy feels for him. But she's afraid that in ten years she'll end up like him if she doesn't stop Angel or leave Angel or do something. At the moment she doesn't know much about him besides his mistreatment that he gets. Later she'll see more of him. Through his writing and in the light of day.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 8

William is just a shadow of the man that is portrayed in the photo album. The time he has spent in a dead marriage has well and truly smothered the life out of him. Buffy should take to heart the person that William has become, stuck in a rut with no desire to move on with his life beyond his marriage. Complacency, despair and insecurity are now his companions and the weird part is that he seems to shoulder the responsibility of what went wrong with his marriage. What the hell? Buffy should point out the fact that his marriage has long been laid to rest with no hope of him breathing any life back into it. William for some reason is mourning and moping over what could have been and is held prisoner by his own sense of guilt the he is the catalyst of Drusilla’s infidelities. Seeking solace with each other may be the trick for both William and Buffy to shed their reasons for staying in a love-less marriage. Looking forward to the next chapter.


Author's Response: Ya its sad. This story is kind of hard to write because William is so weak and fragile. Nothing like Spike anymore. As for Buffy, well....she's going to make a lot of mistakes before things get better...she may drag William down with her in the process... Thanks for the long review. I like long reviews :)

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter 8

Awww...that's so sweet...and sad. They both have such doubts about themselves. They totally need support from each other right now. :)

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Date: 03/17/2009 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter 7

Well, I'm all caught up here and now I have to beg for an update...please.

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Date: 03/17/2009 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 6

This is my favorite chapter so far, your William is great!

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Date: 03/16/2009 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 5

Loved this bit;

William sighed and said, “I can’t, I sort of have this weakness for girls that cry…can’t bloody stand it.”

and I adored your inner William dialogue. Can't wait to see how you develop his character further and his past with Dru.

Reviewer: ArabellaElfie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter 4

You made me do a fangirl squeal, I might need to kill you for that ;) The introduction of William was well done and I really like the gentlemanly manner you've given him. It suits.

Reviewer: ArabellaElfie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm intrigued! I can't wait for the William-ness of the plot to start.

See, I say plot -and I mean plot, but another part of me just means William/Spike goodness.

Reviewer: ArabellaElfie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 2

First off, the mention about 'Are You Afraid of the Dark' was great! I honeslty have a yen to watch that - after I finish this of course.

Secondly, I really love the confusion over 'swing'. I'm a fan of misinterperatation.

Reviewer: ArabellaElfie Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2009 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 1

One chapter in and so far I really like the use of Wolfram and Hart as the setting as well as the mix of character I see coming. This looks very promising. :)

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

No! Don't let Buffy be devious.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 7

Just started reading the story and I must say I'm loving it!!! Great plot - fab. writing what more could one wish for:)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 7

wonderful chapter, and love Buffy and Spike. Looking forward to more please

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 07:33 am Title: Chapter 7

Buffy is a fool if she gives Angel another chance. I hope she eventually sees the light. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter 7

No good deed goes unpunished! What has Buffy set herself up for? I think Buffy unknowingly is viewing a glimpse of her own future from William's circumstance. Especially if she continues to deny the awful truth of her sham of a marriage. Perhaps in her attempts to save William an ackward morning, Buffy is trying to see how Angel will handle the fact that she is with another man. Must go through the pain to get better and she is certainly in the throes of agony trying to decide what her next move should be. I hope that William "grows a pair" and tells Angel to "borrow" Drusilla for as long as he'd like because he is not remotely done with Buffy....just to let Angel and Dru dwell on how badly they are taking their own spouse for granted. Anyways, look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 7

I am scared that Buffy will break Williams heart after she helps him, by trying to patch things up with Angel. I loved the coaxing buffy did to get his story. Great chapter, I will a wait the next one lol.

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter 7

Hopefully Buffy realizes that her words are true. She and Angel are over. They're so different, and she and William are so alike. She just needs to see it!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2009 - 02:33 am Title: Chapter 6

love this story &intrigued where it will go, will they both move out & move in together, or go back to their old lives & meet up ocasionally? looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

Poor Spike! Having to pay off his partners at these parties. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Jaden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6

Holy cabooses! I read all of this is one go and I'm desperate for more. Asshole Angel, poor Buffy, and yummy Spike. Who could ask for more?

Reviewer: lovesparklys Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 6

okay now I can breathe. I thought you were going to make spike a swinger. But now I hope you aren't. Love the story so far.

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFAn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aww...well at least now we know what's going on with William. I knew he wasn't like that...just knew it in my gut, but I was afraid anyway! I hope that they can for a strong bond!

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm really impressed with your ability to leave just enough of a tease to make us wanting more while still getting some substance into the chapter moving the plot forward. As I've been saying in all my reviews, I love this story. I'm following it closely and excited to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Matinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2009 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 6

Hi! I really like this fic, pleaese update soon!

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