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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh, dear, she's really got herself backed into a corner now, hasn't she? Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Yes, Buffy is kicking herself. And you're welcome. :)

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 10

I can't believe that I haven't been reading this story! First, love the banner. Second, it's not that much of a stretch to imagine Buffy being blind to Angel's indescretions and being completely naive. Third, not quite sure what to make of your William. I imagine that within that 1st year, he had to have been a bit of Spike to try to keep up with Dru, but not sure how to take him as what Angel would call wounded puppy. I always love Dru/Buffy conversations because not enough of them happened in the show. I'll definitely be keeping up with this story from now on.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the banner :) I think it has to be on my top 5 of best that I've made so far...I'm not so good at Photoshop (even thou i wish i was). You'll find out about Spike/William and what's going on with him soon. Thanks for the review and taking a chance on this story hope you like how it goes.

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Date: 03/29/2009 - 11:22 am Title: Chapter 10

Well, at least Buffy isn't sleeping with the jerk! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Ya, after finding out he's been cheating on her for that long I would say she doesn't want to be around him at all for a while.

Reviewer: nat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter 10

Buffy shut up! Stop talking and kick that "Bastard....you piece of shit…you scum bucket…." husband to the curb! Grab William and get the hell out of there!

Author's Response: Ya...she does need a good slap in the face. However, who is going to give it to her? William? He's in the same spot as her.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 10

Okay....Buffy just found out that she is married to a person who is a complete stranger to her. Her marriage is nothing more than a lie where it is just for show of respectability to present to polite society. Years spent with a man who cares little of her heart and well being has got to either make her stronger or break her. I'm hoping that Buffy will surprise Angel and Drusilla by not playing by their rules and make new ones of her own. Since she is hosting the next party, she has home court advantage and can therefore dictate how this party will play out. First have Angel and Drusilla pair off as they always do and go off to do their cheating ways. Then invite at a later hour the respectable and influential work superiors and family members to the party so that she can have them follow her to the bedroom and have them witness Angel and Drusilla in the act. Buffy and William can then walk out on the cheating pair and leave them there in front of their colleagues shocked, embarrassed and humiliated. All is fair in love and war and Drusilla has certainly declared war against Buffy.


Author's Response: I'm not married.I for one am not even in a relationship...but after observing the guts of my parents messy separation but still managed to stay together, it actually happens in real life what Buffy is doing. She knows he's no good ...that he isn't worth a second go but she still wants to be with him. At the moment Buffy doesn't have a lot of options and she thinks that she needs to stay with him until she gets a plan.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter 10

Hurray! Another chapter. I have to tell you I was waiting anxiously at my e-mail inbox for this one. Oh silly, silly Buffy. Interesting though, I'm glad she looked deeper and is trying to find out more, more about the truth. Thank you for writing!

Author's Response: Ya...she needs the truth. Once she finds out the truth it gives her better closure with Angel so she can be free to do what she likes.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh wow, Buffy stepped in that pile of horse crap all on her own, the uh party at her house one.

Author's Response: ya..she brought on the trouble herself. She can't blame anyone for her stupid move there.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2009 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter 10

OK--I can see Buffy wanted more information from Dru but, what is the point of continuing to pretend? She should just have taped Dru and then gotten herself a really good divorce attorney. Of course, that probably wouldn't play into your story line but I'm not a good enough actor to continue pretending and I can't imagine that Buffy would be either.

I'll be interested to see how you play this out.

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Author's Response: hehe...I agree that she handled the situation awful with Dru, and that she should not have talked her way into the corner and let it go as far as saying she would be the hostess to the next swinger party. At this point the purpose of calling Dru instead of William was b/c she need that little bit of info to decide what to do next...hhhmm....maybe i've confused you more.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2009 - 03:58 am Title: Chapter 9

Huh? WTF? I expected her to meet William, maybe, but Dru? Why? Did you skip over time, was the first 9 chappies flashbacks or something? Surely she's not gonna give Wm's folder to Dru?
I can understand not showing her hand, but why didnt Buffy tell Angel how she felt about going to the party and clearing up that she'd had misconceptions about the type of party it was--because apparently he had misunderstood her knowledge of this type of swing party--- ie swing/swing dancing vs swinger & swingers!
He's at fault for being the lying cheating POS that Angel almost indubitably is, she's at fault a) for not ascertaining exactly what kind of event she was going to in the first place, and b) at least for not owning up to her naievetee' initially, not to mention her objections after-the-fact.
I adore your William so far. You've just gotta love a shy William. (So long as this is honestly his character and not an act...?) Did you say what exactly he does for a living, or is he a trophy hubby? I figured he, too, was a power-hubby until I read how you characterized him so far.
Well, I'm well and truly hooked. I started and read all 9 chappie so far tonight...time while reading the flew by and too soon I was at the end to date, left wanting MORE!
~~Kara

Author's Response: Ya...i was expecting her to meet William too...but i changed my mind at the last minute and i hope i don't regret it. No, she's not going to give Dru William's folder. Buffy doesn't want to give Dru anything...maybe a slap on the cheek. No, the first 9 chapters weren't fashbacks...I'll say 'flashback' if needed. The thing about Buffy not talking to Angel about the party was basically b/c her embarrassment for confusing what she was attending. Buffy at this point is torn--should she yell at him b/c of this one time thing, this misunderstanding that she didn't talk with him about and stop him, or is there more to the story? She needs more facts. William is a gentle for sure. I didn't say waht his job is...all you know is that he was in a band and that he writes. More to come on his daily life style. He defiantly isn't the trophy hubby....well not in Dru's eyes that is. Before I starting writing this I had to decide if William/Spike was going to a swinger like the rest or the guy I turned out writing about now...I decided to make him like Buffy...they could see eye to eye and connect on this level---they both are having trouble giving up on their spouse. Thanks for the review and hope you enjoy more. :)

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2009 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter 9

I just found this wonderful story! Interesting plotline and a tricky little cliffhanger in this chapter.

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you found it too :) It was buried under many recently updated stories and I'm happy to see their are seekers. :)

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/19/2009 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 9

ooooohhhhhhh. I can't wait for more, more, more!

Author's Response: It's coming...slowly...but it still is coming. I have not forgotten about this while still doing my stupid school work...even though that should be my #1 priority....oh well...

Reviewer: Em Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 9

Uhoh. I smell trouble. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Trouble just keeps coming. :)

Reviewer: moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 9

uuuuuuuuuuuuuupdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!^^

Author's Response: It's posted :) Enjoy and tell me what ya like...or don't like.

Reviewer: Klara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 07:47 am Title: Chapter 9

Hello DRU....??? *Groans* that is evil cliffhanger. Love it as always, and biting my nails off while waiting for next chapter.

Author's Response: Ya...i'm bumped too that it's dru...hehe...you were expecting Will huh? Well, don't worry he's coming...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter 9

Why would Buffy want to talk to Dru about?? Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: You'll see.

Reviewer: BuffyXenaDQFan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 9

Hmm...now what could this meeting be about? I'm intrigued...and worried!

Author's Response: Well the girls are certainly not getting together to swap Angel sex stories...

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter 9

Interesting that Buffy and Dru are meeting up, whoever prompted the get together has something they need to get off their chest. So, will Dru approach Buffy about William or Angel? Should be telling on what she wants to discuss with the wife of the man she has used as a lover and confidant. Buffy, on the other hand, has the opportunity to tell Dru that the party took her unawares considering that neither Angel nor Dru had prepared her for the "theme" of the social event. Whether they discuss issues based on their marriage or their difference of lifestyles should be interesting in showing what is important to each woman. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: This was Buffy's little idea to get together with Dru. She'll defiantly be regretting soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:28 am Title: Chapter 9

Interesting...I am curious what Buffy's thoughts on Williams story was and what the heck are Buffy and Dru meeting for?

Author's Response: Well the girls are not going out for coffee that is for sure. The contents of Will's story will be coming up in ch.11.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 9

Oh, what an evil place to leave it! I want to know what Buffy's going to say - more soon, please!!

Author's Response: Ya...I'm a bit evil. But i updated so I guess that cancels out the evil....well maybe...

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 05:02 am Title: Chapter 9

hmmmmmm, verrrrry interesting. :) Still reading, still enjoying, still intrigued.

Author's Response: thanks :)

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2009 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update. :)

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Date: 03/17/2009 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 8

I feel bad for William and Buffy. They should both get out of their marriages. Can't wait for another update!

Author's Response: Ya, they need to get out...but they have some hurtles they need to jump over to get there.

Reviewer: iris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

This is a good one.......Please continue!

Author's Response: thanks, glad you enjoy it.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 11:28 am Title: Chapter 8

Still enjoying the story thanks for writing! :) things feeling like their moving a bit slowly perhaps but still wonderful.

Author's Response: ya, i noticed things were going a bit slow too. But now I feel the pace is getting picked up and we are actually getting somewhere instead of going around in circles.

Reviewer: moa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2009 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter 8

wonderful story! please update soon!

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