Date: 05/01/2009 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter Three
lol I definitely pictures Spike all wanting and fighting for control over his lust... Dang.. Buffy is seriously strong-willed cuz I would have jumped him lol!
Great chapter!
Date: 04/27/2009 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter Three
Lol, I'm sorry, but the fact they want each other so badly is hilarious. And I love Spike--teasing her with the innuendo is fantastic.
Date: 03/29/2009 - 05:59 am Title: Chapter Three
I'm amazed there aren't more reviews... this is excellent so far. I'm a fan of annoying, sarcastic evil Spike, myself, and this story hits its target. You also capture Buffy's voice well.
Love the details in the writing, 'avalanche of condiments' springs to mind, and the train of thought 'first nonsexual thought: blood' moment.
Hope I continue to be impressed as I read...
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! To be honest, I'm amazed by all the reviews; I wasn't really expecting too much, so I'm thrilled beyond belief! And I'm glad you like the details; I write what I see so sometimes I feel like I'm getting too focused. :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! To be honest, I'm amazed by all the reviews; I wasn't really expecting too much, so I'm thrilled beyond belief! And I'm glad you like the details; I write what I see so sometimes I feel like I'm getting too focused. :)
Author's Response: crap another duplicated response? what the hell? stupid computer. :(
Date: 03/28/2009 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Three
Look there - both had the same fantasy back then whilst fighting *g*
Though I wonder if the blood is still good.