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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2012 - 09:53 am Title: 36 Degrees

Such a hot little chapter!

Few notes:
think all four times you use the word "laid" you'd be better with "laying." Lay/lie are tricky verbs with tricky and crossing conjugations... always have to look them up myself.

Also, you say she "got passed him" but it should be "past." And you should hyphenate "stomach-flippng" but didn't, and you shouldn't hyphenate "in between." Think there were a few other minor points, too.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 - 05:33 pm Title: 36 Degrees

That escalated incredibly fast. One stumble, and they're nearly over the cliff, and then Spike pulls away and disappears. Like Buffy, I thought that was the end of it. Spike's reappearance and the searing kiss came out of left field. These two are in for a lot of thinking.

Reviewer: sask Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2009 - 07:41 am Title: 36 Degrees

I heart that kiss!!!

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Reviewer: spikeluver Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2009 - 01:27 am Title: 36 Degrees

finish quick please!

Author's Response: I'll try my best!!!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 11:11 pm Title: 36 Degrees

Interesting. I hope they have that talk soon! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 09:52 pm Title: 36 Degrees

Unexpected reaction of them both - surprised them both.
Makes me wonder what they both will think about it the next day.

Reviewer: laura_exist2inspire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 09:44 pm Title: 36 Degrees

Evil Rae with the luke warm fun!! Lol. Very hot chapter, looking forward to more

Author's Response: Lol I was just trying to let everyone know there will be more to come...and it'll be A LOT hotter ;)

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2009 - 08:50 pm Title: 36 Degrees

You're evil to tease the readers like that. That was not luke warm. It's more like a deep flush or slow boil. Like how your Spike wouldn't let Buffy run away until she actually voiced her objection. At least their confusion is mutual and without any past squickiness references. Poem bookend to the chapter was a nice touch. I'm so poetry-illiterate...is it yours?

Author's Response: Its a song by Placebo, that one is called '36 degrees'...Its why i like Placebo so much, because their lyrics are very poetic... All the Chapters are named after Placebo songs and the lyrics to the chapter song will pop up everynow and again... Oh and I like "deep flush" I think thats a gd description :P Thanx for your comment, I hope you keep reading!

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