Date: 12/03/2012 - 10:18 am Title: Special K
Some mistakes still showing up, like in this chap you have Buffy starting some sentences with "me." (Shouldn't begin sentences with me, her him or us.)
Some other errors this chap and previous.
Author's Response: I should if thats the way my character speaks!
Date: 08/09/2009 - 12:49 am Title: Special K
And Buffy inadvertently pulls Spike even further into her web. It's delicious.
Date: 05/04/2009 - 07:59 am Title: Special K
She gots him good! Sexy dance with Faith would get any guy's motor revving. Spike is so in trouble now. Way to go turning up the heat for both major characters in alternating ways. Your Spike is over the fact that Buffy is younger than him--desire and lust will end up trumping his point-of-view when it comes to Buffy being a woman. Buffy being his "sister" is something that will definitely be a big roadblock still...
Great chapter. Poor, horny Spike.
Date: 05/02/2009 - 11:39 pm Title: Special K
Looks like Spike is seeing a different side of Buffy. Loved it! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 05/02/2009 - 03:42 pm Title: Special K
Loved it !! Faith and Buffy dancing in Spike's view was never a good idea lol or maybe it was a very very good one !? Looking forward to more :-)
Date: 05/01/2009 - 10:29 pm Title: Special K
I didn't expect an update so soon; thanks for that.
*nods* I don't think Spike sees Buffy as a small kid now after the dance.
~ Looking forward to more.
Date: 05/01/2009 - 09:39 pm Title: Special K
thanks for the update! looking forward to reading more soon!