So, so, so beautiful, so sexy, so hot.

A few things, among them, should have to "rein" himself in, not "reign," and it's "throes" of passion or orgasm, not "throws."

Gosh, I don't know how I've missed catching up to your stories. I'm not even sure which chapter I last reviewed, so I'll start with the smutty, even though I've read-up to the morning after.

Now that they've finally consummated their growing and very non-familial desires for one another, it should be apparent to Spike that this is probably something more for Buffy. She gave her virginity to him, which she probably could have unloaded off to some secondary character out-of-story (Angel? Parker?) which makes is a big deal.

When Spike tells Buffy "you've never been in love" you know that that's going to have to do with things later in the story. Buffy will either 1) admit to loving him, and Spike won't know what to do with her love or 2) Buffy will run scared because she doesn't realize that what she has with Spike IS real.

Anyway, this was a fan-worthy, ice-cube crushing-with-my-teeth-type of chapter. Well done!



Author's Response: Thankyou so much for the review!

Good chapter - hopefully Buffy won't have second thoughts now :)
(As for the updates - that's what Pari said here, she isn't around so much at the moment and only she can validate stories.)

Please just keep posting.

Author's Response: I will x Keep reading!