Date: 12/03/2012 - 11:14 am Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
Notes
some small ones, plus:
couldn't "bear" the thought, not bare
"drawers" not draws
Date: 10/15/2009 - 03:36 pm Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
Spike running away isn't going to solve anything. This just hurts.
Date: 08/09/2009 - 11:35 am Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
heartbreaking & very well written, loved it =)
Author's Response: Thankyou!
Date: 08/01/2009 - 12:37 am Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
Spike is a coward for running away. He's a fool if he thinks he can go from brother to lover and then back to brother. He's so confused hes even confusing me! Can't wait for more!
Date: 07/30/2009 - 05:06 am Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
Nice to see this back...oof! that packed a wallop...I liked the way spike was crossing out words and replacing them, which reveals more actually, especially the last part with the brother..oh brother!
Date: 07/30/2009 - 04:41 am Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
So sad! I hope that an update come soon. It will be so hard to wait. Poor Spike! Poor Buffy! Heartbreaking!
Date: 07/30/2009 - 01:57 am Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
Hey! Doesn't his signing the letter he left "your brother" make everything he previously said a lie. She doesn't need him as her brother , which he isn't and hasn't been for quite sometime. So now not only is he a cheater but a liar? Ughhhh! update soon , will ya! This is good , it has all the elements of a good soap opera.
Date: 07/29/2009 - 09:25 pm Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
she doesn't want a brother, you moron. not liking your spike at all right now, he's such a coward and yeah, buffy deserves better. i hate men that think they have the right to make decisions for us, not sure how i feel about this story right now. i'll probably give one more chapter a chance, but i'm not sure if i would be able to continue.
Author's Response: I hate guys who make decisions for us too...but it happens...Buffy is I promise going to tell him what a moron he was for not asking her what she wanted...but it won't be for a while...I hope you can continue with the story, but I did warn of angst and a seperation and thats just the way the story is planned, otherwise it'd be over rather quickly...neither of them could survive on their own before the story starts...they seperate, go as low as they can get til they realise what they want for themselves...thats just what I want from the characters before they get anywhere near being together...right now Buffy's too naive and Spike has issues, both of which I've brought up and both of which were being overlooked by them being together because they were too lost in it all...
Author's Response: I hate guys who make decisions for us too...but it happens...Buffy is I promise going to tell him what a moron he was for not asking her what she wanted...but it won't be for a while...I hope you can continue with the story, but I did warn of angst and a seperation and thats just the way the story is planned, otherwise it'd be over rather quickly...neither of them could survive on their own before the story starts...they seperate, go as low as they can get til they realise what they want for themselves...thats just what I want from the characters before they get anywhere near being together...right now Buffy's too naive and Spike has issues, both of which I've brought up and both of which were being overlooked by them being together because they were too lost in it all...
Date: 07/29/2009 - 09:16 pm Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
Didn't guess Spike would try to run away for now. Seems he wants to avoid Buffy for all costs. If she wants something different she'll has to tell him. If she's still interested.
Date: 07/29/2009 - 06:44 pm Title: In The Cold Light Of Morning
Thanks for the very sad update. I'll be looking forward to more soon.