Date: 01/13/2010 - 08:51 am Title: Slave To The Wage
Lovely chapter. Poor Buffy. Always so afraid to go for what she really wants.
Date: 01/13/2010 - 01:51 am Title: Slave To The Wage
Great update! Looking forward to more!
Date: 01/13/2010 - 01:24 am Title: Slave To The Wage
Thanks for the update, great chapter. I'm always happy to see one, looking forward to more.
Date: 01/12/2010 - 10:46 pm Title: Slave To The Wage
You said last time: Sorry still don't see the problem...even reading it back I just don't understand the confusion so I dunno what else to say...In my opinion its perfectly clear from Buffy's non-commital response and locking the letter away that she didn't react to his leaving until he'd left and the CD forced a reaction from her...
I think for me it is that I want to see them back together (looking forward to) so I don't see it through Buffy's eyes like you do, seeing 'the whole' story. I can't explain it better. Don't worry about it. I think it would have been better for me to read the whole story not as a WIP, to read it all in one when it's finished. Would have been easier and maybe better to understand for me. Not your fault. With a WIP you'll never know what you get. ;)
Buffy is really at a bad place at the moment.
Still here, still reading. I don't give up easily on a story even if I don't understand a twist.
Author's Response: Hmm okay, I still don't think I get it (sorry again) I mean I think the story wouldn't make a lick of sense if they got back together so soon, and also it would be very unrealistic and a bit pansy (lol sorry couldn't think of another word) to have the characters suddenly change and react to things differently, they both avoid things, have all the way through, obviously they will eventually come back together, but only after time and experiences teach them its necessary, but obviously its my story so its very personal to me...
but despite our differing opinions (or maybe because of them) I do want to stress that the fact that you're still reading is greatly appreciated :)
Date: 01/12/2010 - 09:51 pm Title: Slave To The Wage
Still here, still reading and I'll be waiting, no matter how long it takes.
Author's Response: Thankyou so much!