Whoa...literally, I went whoa...love the curveball, things we're getting too cozy...good cliffie

...and the other shoe drops.

Interesting twist in that it was Spike that was the downfall of the Spike/Dru lovefest.

To be honest is brutal, hence the term brutally honest. Buffy's initial reaction will continue to sow seeds of doubt into her bergeoning relationship with Spike. She stewed about it all day and into the night until Spike returned--that's why it's so hard for Buffy to remember the giddiness of the very consummation of their relationship.

She, too, is not without feelings of guilt--at what they were to each (step-siblings) and what they are to each other (lovers). Shades of season 6 color their guilt. It's going to be interesting to see the circumstances that lead to Spike's past behavior--because he's always portrayed as the loyal one. The fact that you make Spike so fallable makes this story a more realistic read.



Author's Response: I'm glad you think so...I obviously love the character of Spike in the show, but like you said I did want to make him more fallable because he is human here and he's not a William sort of human, he's Spike, so he's made mistakes and they're on a Spike kind of scale...thankyou for the review and please keep reading :)

yep, that's what i guessed, it's refreshing seeing as how dru's always the one to cheat, but now buffy is going to have even more doubts, like if he did it once, he's capable of doing it again, but i'm hoping that's not the case here. i wonder who the other girl was.

Author's Response: All will be revealed (though it may seem an obvious choice, as I do like to go back to the show)...thanx for the review, I'm glad you found it refreshing, it was because I noticed that Dru is always the one to cheat that I made it Spike...I didn't want to write crazy evil Dru, I just wanted her to be a normal girl in Spike's past that he'd hurt, thats why in the first Chapter I didn't give a reason for Buffy's dislike of her, I just said they didn't get on...

I think this chapter worked really well, I liked the fact it had no dialogue until the end, looking forward to more

That was intense...it illustrates their NEED for each other

Author's Response: Thankyou!

Very hot! Hope the upcoming angst isn't too intense. Can't wait to read more!

You did a fine job! Although, I did want to mention a couple of spelling errors. Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Okay didn't see any myself before uploading and spell checked it just now and didn't find anything...

No dialogue....so sexy. So completely sexy.

Author's Response: Thankyou :)

Your slow build to consummation and then this glimpse at the Buffy and Spike sexcapades shows how quickly things turned on a dime. Leaving us with an image of Spike trying to collect himself shows that he knows that things are spiraling out-of-control and that this can’t possibly be good/healthy. I think that you’ve knocked the foundation blocks just this side much askew for the reader to anticipate that things will crumble. Great job! Oh, and I just loved how steamy they were together.

Loved it, glad Buffy and Spike got to talk and that Buffy is feeling a little less confused about her feelings for him, glad to see another chapter up too =D

Awesome chapter! SO HOT! I don't blame Buffy for clinging on to the hotness that is Spike. I'm sure they are in for a topsy-turvey ride, but they sure have that passion and it will be fun to watch. Now to only tell the parents. :-)

Thank for giving us another update! Enjoyed the chapter and looking forward to the following.