THE SPUFFY REALM :: Come on you know you wanna dance

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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked

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Date: 01/28/2014 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 9: Hold On Hope

So hot, needs a sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks, ScarlettDuck! :D I've wanted to do a sequel to this story all along, but something always came up and it got put on the backburner. That happens a lot with me... lol I had mucho fun writing this fic, and it was the first one I did after my long hiatus, I still hope to get to the sequel someday :) Thanks for the review, hon! *smooch*

Reviewer: ROSE Signed Liked

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Date: 10/05/2012 - 12:53 am Title: Chapter 9: Hold On Hope

Does this have a sequel? Cos if not then it certainly deserves one.

It's a pretty spicy story none the less, but i really think it needs a sequel as the whole time throughout this story i was thinking 'It'd be funny if he actually took her suggestion that he could be a male stripper more seriously.

I just couldn't stop thinking what a transformation that would be.

So say it's like a year down the line...or at least he's turned 18 now and in college. Either Buffy chickened out and didn't call him back. Or she did and they continued the affair till Buffy found out he was 17 and that she was his first time and freaks and stops the affair and out of guilt tries harder to be a better wife to Riley who is the same old same old and doesn't change. Buffy tells him her real age (as a reason for them not to continue the affair and why it is wrong and so on)

Anyways as i said this is a year down the line or at least after he has turned 18. So Buffy and William haven't seen eachother for bit. Though they have thought of each other none stop since.

Anyways dispite the break up Will becomes more confident in himself, with others and with women. (This is all back story of what happens from when they break up to when they see each other again) Infact he has become the complete opposite of his shy clumsy self, though has kept the sweetness and adorability. Anyways either he loses his job or his job as a waiter simply means he's just scraping by in college.

Either way he DOES actually become a male exotic dancer, which gives him a good income and time to study maybe even take up some hobbies like marital arts or something. By this time he's bleached his hair and either wears contacts or has had eye surgery. (Still back story)

So the story begins with Buffy's mates who knows she's in a boring lifeless marriage with Riley encourage her out to a male dance club. Or maybe its one of her girlfriend’s hen party. So like it's Willow's hen party or Cordy's organised by Anya of course (cos of course it'd be Anya who orginises the hen party/or whatever occasion it is) at a male exotic dance club. And the club's star dancer 'Spike' is the final dancer of the night.

Spike comes on, he doesn't she Buffy instantly, but when Buffy sees him at first she isn't to sure its him, she recognises his body the hair throws her off. But as soon as their eyes meet and they see each other (for the first time since the breakup) Buffy knows for sure its him and vice versa. And the story carries on from there.

Of course they hook up eventually in secret, her girlfriends eventually find out also. She tells them after much prodding ans speculation from Anya mostly. They all keep it secret from Riley and even encourage and praise Buffy's affair.

Maybe something happens, like Riley finds out somehow. Not sure how he would though. Bur by this time maybe Buffy has had enough of everything he has put her through and isn't as scared as she once was about ending her marriage with him. And not for William but for herself. Buffy is still able to maintain a good relationship with both Dawn and Andrew though Riley tries to make it as difficult as possible.

Spike and Buffy by the end of the story are together. Spike still dances at the club (as its good money) which though at first Buffy is apprehensive about but eventually is cool with as she knows he's really dancing for her and is happy for him the flaunt what he's got and making woman drool knowing he's all hers to take home.

As i said before i couldn’t stop thinking bout the possibility of a sequel as it is almost begging for one.

Either way it was a pretty good read.

Author's Response: Hi Rose! Can I just say Wow? Your ideas for a sequel are awesome! I've always wanted to do a sequel to this story, I just didn't have the time to get to it - there are a few other sequels I need to write in the queue lol I did write a little bit of it and made some notes. But what you came up with is better than what I had planned! lol You have to be an author too, the ideas you had are too good for you not to be a writer :) Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, and I'm so happy you enjoyed the story! *hugs*

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked

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Date: 05/24/2009 - 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hold On Hope

This was so hot! I'm sorry it's over. I had it in my head that Andrew and William were gonna be freshman roommates, so that Buffy and William would meet again. I guess that will just have to be my little fantasy! Anyway, thanks for sharing this sexiness with us!

Author's Response: Thank you, claire! :D Your idea was good! Hmm I'll have to think about that for the sequel hehehe It was my pleasure to share the smut :) Thanks for reviewing, hon! *Smoochies*

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked

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Date: 05/23/2009 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hold On Hope

Buffy knew she would end up calling him. And not just to say thanks for a wonderful evening. -- WOO HOO!!!! THERE'LL BE MORE!!!!

I'm so glad you came back to us, Pagan; and what a great comeback it was! Can't wait for more of you, hun!
*mwah*

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you enjoyed it, hon! *big hugs* Thank you :) I'm so relieved that my first long fic was met with such positive reaction! I'm working on a bunch more, so hopefully it won't be long before I have another fun story for ya hehehe You're the sweetest!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked

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Date: 05/23/2009 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 8: Turnabout Is Fair Play

There's no fuckin' way I can go back to Riley's sad excuse for sex after this!'
I'm going to hold on to this line for dear life, and jump to the next chapter with all my faith in you!

Please don't let me fall into depression!

THEY HAVE TO BE TOGETHER, DAMN IT!
(love it, btw :P *huggles*

Author's Response: Thanks, Sotia! I hope you'll find the next part uplifting heehee *smooches*

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked

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Date: 05/21/2009 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 9: Hold On Hope

Aww...what a wonderful last chapter. Ya know, your evil for leaving it where it was :D I hope there is at least a one shot in the future.

I kinda want Buffy to find out about Spike and visa versa though. I would love to read about their reactions and feelings, then how they shove it all aside coz they just don't care. Oh and I would love to see Buffy flick Riley to the curb. Oh yes, I am evil too, ain't I?? But, overall, I loved this fic, the sex was amazing :D

Author's Response: Thanks, bk! I'm glad you liked! heehee I'll be doing a sequel that deals with the things you mentioned ;) Buffy and William will have a lot to talk about when the truth comes out. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *big smooches*