I really loved almost the whole story, very well written. The only thing I didn't like was the ending, they were so responsible with being pregnant at such a young age and getting their lives together, to gave buffy preggid again first year out if high school with the other baby just a year old thru all that mature responsibilities out the window.

Great start! You jumped right in with both feet lol I like how you started out on 'the morning after', and having Spike and Buffy deal with their feelings and what it means for their friendship. *smoochies*

And great banner, so purdy!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!! I'm so glad you liked it! *smoochies back!*

Oh Admitting feelings is a hard thing to do. Poor Buffy. divorce has to be a hard thing to go through.

Author's Response: Thanks again! Yeah, Buffy's got enough going on, so I think giving it a go with Spike is a scary thing, because her parents are getting divorced.

Glad to see that you are writing another story. I adore your latest After the Fall. Spike has a lot of loss in his short life. If anybody can help Buffy get through the divorce of her parents then it is Spike. Since he loss so much already. Spike and Buffy need to be honest with how they feel. I wonder who is going to be the brave one first and let the other know their true feelings. If anybody I would go with Spike since he was always honest with his feelings on the show. Or maybe Buffy. Or maybe they blurt it out at the same time. LOL I can't wait to see how they find out. I hope it is soon so they will torturing themselves. I mean they already had sex so be honest with your feelings.

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update ATF very soon, I hope! :) Lots more to come on this one soon as well!

Wonderful beginning. Can't wait for more of this. :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pet!