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Reviewer: PaganBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 20

Aww Dawn's so cute! I'd let her be my little sister if Buffy didn't want her lol It's great that everyone is making an effort to adjust to the new, scary things happening in their lives. Hank's on his way to redeeming himself by being so cool about Buffy's pregnancy and letting her stay in SunnyD.

Hmm I like that there's a talent scout at the club. Spike might get discovered! :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 20

Good time for Dawn and Buffy. It's a bad situation (with Hank having Dawn) but it's not Dawn's fault.
Spike? Makes me wonder if the talent scout will change things. (Devon didn't stop to go to school and didn't sign a contract. Not sure what Spike would do, he needs money. And what not finish school will mean for him in the long run.)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it's definitely a crappy situation, but they'll get through it the best they can. :) Lots more coming soon!

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter, cute scenes with Dawn - I'm glad Buffy's going to get to know her sister.

I'm amazed at how quickly you get chapters out - you're awesome! Looking forward to more :)

Author's Response: Thanks Xaph! *G*

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 08:29 am Title: Chapter 20

You update really fast. *lol* I love it when I got more than just one chapter to read. Glad Buffy and Dawn got to meet. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: LOL, thanks Pet! I try to do two or three updates a day now, because I get frustrated when my fave fics get good and then I have to wait forever for another chapter! LOL

Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter 20

I read your last few updates. Sad about Joyce. You wrote the angst well with a spark of hope, which made it easier to read.
Glad Hank realized that Buffy needs to stay at home.. at least for time being.
Dawn is cute. I like how Buffy is trying.. but loving her should take some time. Dawn is her sister and therefore Buffy shouldn't have to take care of her as a mother, but as an older sister. The way Buffy is with Dawn shouldn't be seen as her ability to be a mom to her own child.

I'd like to see how the pregnancy goes.. not month to month story. But how Buffy feels about the changes and becoming a mom and what about Spike, how does he feel.

I could read more Spike- plot, but haven't felt lacking of it so far..
More naked Spike is always appreciated ;)

I like what you've done with the story so far and cannot wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks Kristy! I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story! Yeah, I'm trying not to make Hank into a complete ass, and I think he's definitely gonna step up as more of a dad in the coming chapters, especially when Buffy and Spike experience some troubles. Not to worry though. Spike and Buffy are a strong couple. :) It helps that they've been best friends forever. I'll definitely try to put more of the emotions behind the pregnancy into it. I think that's what you mean, right? More naked Spike? Done. :)

Reviewer: Ivana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter 20

ok. I was shocked with last few chapters but I liked them a lot. Strong Buffy is my favourite! and cute Dawn...ohhh.....can't wait for new chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you're enjoying it and that you like strong Buffy! Yay!

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 05:48 am Title: Chapter 20

AWW Dawn is so cute. I liked that Buffy made an effort to be nice and welcoming..she is her sister and it wasn't her fault what happened. Good to see Spike doing his own thing with his music, and a talent scout is around. Maybe something will come of that.

Love your quick updates. thanx! :) Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks Ami! Yeah, I wasn't a HUGE Dawn fan, but I prefer writing her when she's young. :)

Reviewer: guest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 04:38 am Title: Chapter 20

I read the endnotes to chapter 19. I'm glad that you didn't take my comments about this story seems like the Buffy story and not really a Buffy and Spike story in a bad a way. I really do like this story and I'm enjoying it. But i guess it is because Spike is easily my favorite character in the Buffyverse that i felt Spike lacking in this story a little. While I was enjoying Spike being the supportive boyfriend and being there for Buffy. I still do enjoy reading Spike as a supportive boyfriend. I just wanted a little more backbone to his character. A little more plot with Spike. But I never want you to feel that you have to change your story and where you go with it. So, I hope I didn't make you feel that way. Like I said, I still love this story very much. I just hope that Buffy and Spike and their baby don't live with her dad and dawn for long. I am for being with your family. But Spike and Buffy and the baby is going to a little family of their own. They are going to need space and privacy of their own. So, I hope that all of them living together isn't a super long thing. I would really want to see Spike and buffy and their child live at that own place. but that is just me. LOL

Author's Response: Thanks for your response! I did definitely think about what you said, and as you could probably tell from Chapter 20, Spike's gonna have a little more going on in the story from now on. Buffy and Spike will live with Hank and Dawn for a while, but I agree with you that they're going to need their own space. However, they're just getting started, and it's gonna take some time before they're financially stable enough to have a place of their own. BUT, they will. I promise! :)

Reviewer: DarkBlue Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter 20

Nice to see Dawn in this chapter. Great chapter. Look forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Darknight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2009 - 04:31 am Title: Chapter 20

And Spike's career begins! Talent agents are scary. Loved the effort Buffy went through to make Dawn feel welcome.

Author's Response: :) Thank you! I'm gonna skip a little bit in the coming chapters. I don't want Buffy's nine months of pregnancy to take 500 chapters like in my other story. Haha..ok, 500 is exaggerating, but still...LOL

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