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Reviewer: Kev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 08:34 am Title: Five Years Ago

It was hard getting through this chapter, as it seems like you took no time at all to read it through. There's random capitalization, tenses out of wank, commas and periods appearing at odd places and the voices are off.

The story isn't bad so far, but if you want good reviews by people who aren't your friends you should take writing more seriously than you have till now.

Author's Response: Thanks for the input. Although Chapter Four isn't the greatest. My writing is getting better. Also. Not everyone who has reviewed is a friend. I have other stories that are worse off in their writings. But. If you'd like to beta for me. That'd be even better. I do take writing seriously also. I'm a poet. Not a full fledged writer. So major differences. Although it's Buffy Fiction, I still take pride in what I do. Yeah it isn't the greatest but it's never going to become written in some big major book :) But. If You continue to read that awesome. I'm glad you are enjoying it. If you don't. Then so be that much. I'm enjoying writing it and I like the way it is heading so far...So other than that. Enjoy. or Read something else :)

Reviewer: fanficmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2009 - 01:07 pm Title: Five Years Ago

Ok after i got done thrashing you on your first paragraph the rest was better!
The story line is good although i am not a fan of spike like you are..lol
love ya
mom

Author's Response: I'm glad it got better. If I had the energy I'd go in and fix the corrections :) Love Yah :)

Reviewer: xoChantelly Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 10:01 pm Title: Five Years Ago

awwwwee!! I love it!! It well written and much with the awesomeness!! *goes to read next chapters* *huggles*

Author's Response: Yay!! :) I'm so freaking glad you like it!! But then again I don't think you'd leave a review saying you hated it either :) haha!! *hugs back* WOOT WOOT!!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 09:46 pm Title: Five Years Ago

good start to the story! cant wait to read more

MORE MORE MORE

Author's Response: More Chapters are coming your way...2 & 3 are finally up. and Soon to come is four and hopefully five :) Glad your ENJOYING it. :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/24/2009 - 01:21 am Title: Five Years Ago

Great beginning! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thankies :) I have Chapters 2 & 3 Just waiting for them to get beta'd and then they'll be up! Your in for a great Twist :)

Reviewer: kudagirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 11:10 pm Title: Five Years Ago

Enjoying so far. Enjoying the playlist you also put on the story.

Paint It Black is by the Rolling Stones. You had no artist on the list for it. Wasn't sure if anyone had told you yet it was the Stones.

Author's Response: Why Thank You :D Yeah I know it's by Rolling Stones, but for some reason they didn't have one, that said rolling stones that was the actually Paint it Black song. Although When the story is actually finished that playlist will only have the songs that are in the story on it. and it'll be a locked playlist :) Which is amazing :D haha But I'm glad your enjoying the story. Chapters 2&3 should be up soon :D

Reviewer: YetWhoAmI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 08:23 pm Title: Five Years Ago

^^ nice. Keep on going girly.

Author's Response: I'll keep on truckin' as long as you keep up with the Spike-talk help :D Thankies! I'll figure out where that Mates is and re-word it to mates also :) haha *dances with you* You Rawk!!!

Reviewer: Jake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 08:21 pm Title: Five Years Ago

I absolutely love this. Please keep going with it. I am making it my personal goal to give you a review for every chapter.

Author's Response: It's not going to get you that one size smaller to fit into your favorite pair of skinny jeans. But I'm kewl with it :) It's very Frope. :) I'll be looking out for you. Everytime you leave a review I'll find something in one of your stories to review :) Oh Hot Damn. This is My Jam!! *heads off dancing*

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 08:18 pm Title: Five Years Ago

It is awesome so far pinksatin. Can't wait to read more hun. *hugs*

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it. I have more chapters. Just waiting on Brett to finish beta-ing them. Woohoo :D *hugs back*

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