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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 09:03 pm Title: Ch 1

Haven't read this one before I think....
but I like the twist and the first chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks hun. Hope to see you reading more. :d

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 06:23 am Title: Ch 1

Great beginning. On to ch 2...

Author's Response: TY so much :D

Reviewer: ? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 03:42 pm Title: Ch 1

Promising story. One thing, though. You use then many times instead of than. It's bothersome. You might want to get a beta.

Author's Response: Oh Wow!! I so do have then for everything. Thank you for pointing that out. i've jsut updated ch 1 and am off to give ch 2 workover as well. TY again for pointing out the grammatical error.

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