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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 01:22 am Title: CH 3

So all has been revealed. On to find out what happens next!

P.S. The spelling is bollocks, not bollix. :)

Author's Response: LoL.. ty hun.

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 - 05:47 am Title: CH 3

I found the story. I actually found it within minutes of looking. I thought it was going to me a long time since I couldn't remember the title or who wrote it. But the story is call "And a Star to Steer Her By" by Sadbhyl. Here is the link just in case you are interested in reading the story some day. Off to go read since it has been years since I read last. If you need the link again for some reason in the future then let me know.

http://web.archive.org/web/20060114000717/www.nocturnal-light.net/stories/a/andastar.html#ch1



Author's Response: You're a darling. Thanks.

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2009 - 04:29 am Title: CH 3

Poor William. He was trying to do the noble thing and wanted to save the women on the ship. Buffy and Willow seem to bite his poor head off because of it. He was only being a gentlemen. LOL I love the real reason why Buffy gave William the nickname Spike. I wonder if she will ever tell him the real reason one day. I also wonder if that was the first time she ever felt a man's penis when it was hard. Something tells me that she has never been physical with a man before. She just seems like she was never interested in being with a man from what i read . Until William came along that is LOL I don't know but that is what I get from Buffy. That story I told you about. The one where Buffy was captain and held William for ransom. Was my favorite Spuffy pirate story. This one could challenge it. I love pirate Spuffy stories. But I think I like it better when Buffy is the captain. This is only the second story that I have read with Buffy as a captain. With the other story she was a little hard and acted tough. But she wasn't a bad or mean person. I think she was like that because she felt that she needed to be for being captain to a bunch of men. I guess she felt that couldn't let think that she was soft because she was a girl. Also, growing up on a pirate ship and being the only little girl. I guess might make most women a little on the not so feminine side. I was looking for a word to say but I couldn't think of anything. So, I just said on the not so feminine side because I couldn't think of anything else. With Spike he always seems to be written as evil or just a very bad man in stories where he is the captain. Maybe, if Spike was written differently than I might like Spike as captain as much or even more so than Buffy. But I don't think so. There is something about Buffy being captain that I love. William being a crew member or like the other story being held for ransom and breaking Buffy down a little. Who wouldn't break down and fall in love with sweet William who also has a bit of an edge to him and that is when you get Spike. So hot. Don't get me wrong. I think I have enjoyed all or at least more Spuffy stories where Spike is the captain. I just think I prefer Buffy as the captain. But you should really read that story after you finish with this one. I'm going to find it because now i'm in the mood to read it again. I know that it is hard to find though because if i remember correctly the person who wrote it. Became a professional writer and rewrote it but of course it wasn't Spuffy. If I remember correctly. It has been many years ago. Way back in the day. So, I might not be able to find it. Wish me luck though. I wish the next few days would pass so I can read the next chapter already. I'm in patience like that.

Author's Response: Thank you, and I did get the other message with the url. I appriciate it. I like that you are really thinking out all the different nuances in the story. Hope you continue to enjoy. :D

Reviewer: Isha-Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 10:28 pm Title: CH 3

LOVE IT!
I love the way they played him, and how William-like it was for him to come to the 'Ladies' defence! I liked Willow's giggling, she is- quite frankly- adorable!
Must say, I love Xander and Oz here. This trully is Xander at his finest. I'm glad he's not the snivelling jealous character, but I'm glad that you do still have someone in that role (bring on something undoubtably horrifying with Parker!)
It was neat how Will evolved so instantly into the confident man we know, as soon as he was presented with his new nickname! Perrrrrrrrfect!

I can't wait for more of this! Hope your next update is soon :)

Author's Response: Na.. I love the Xan man. I get a little tired of reading about how Xander hates Spike, or Xander needs saved or Xander is just a plain old ass. Here he get's to be one of the Heroes.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 10:08 pm Title: CH 3

Oh not an easy first day for William. But it seems he has found a place for himself now, between the crew :)

Author's Response: yeah.. but it's going to get worse for out favorite guy.

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 09:48 pm Title: CH 3

I love it. I love that he has a double meaning to his new nickname and the last couple lines in particular were awesome and cool "We're going to be robbin' them then 'eh?". Perfect.

I'm still a little confused, as I'm sure Spike is about why they were telling him he didn't seem fit for the ship because he was willing to hide a stow-away and then they let him on the ship anyway. All bluff for Buff I suppose.

Anyway, this story is fabulous. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: You got iy. It's Bluffy Buffy. They were just knocking his head around a bit, mostly cuz its just going to get worse. LoL

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2009 - 03:48 pm Title: CH 3

This is quite an enjobale read. I can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks you so much for letting me know. :D

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