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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2009 - 02:08 am Title: CH 4

So glad you managed to find the chapter. I really like Faith's story - it fits her. Having the 'captain' look like Hank is a brilliant idea. lol Thanks for updating.

Author's Response: Always hun. and thanks again for all the helpfull comments and please, keep them comming. even if i do not change things immediately i really to appriciate any critisism aimed at helping.

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 07:31 pm Title: CH 4

Loving it. The only thing that I'm not crazy about is Willow being able to do magic. Only because it makes things to easy for them. At least I think it is going to be too easy for them to do everything. That they are going to be getting away from everything because she knows how to do magic. I don't hate that you have Willow doing magic in this story but I don't love it either. But I'm sure it will grow on me or it won't affect my love for this story. Can't wait to see how William does on the ship. I'm still smiling on the true reason why Buffy gave William the nickname 'Spike'
I'm pleased you got link to the other story. I reread the whole thing already. I remembered why I loved it so much. If you ever do decide to read it then let me know what you think of it. If you decide to read it but after you are finished with this story. I hope you will enjoy it very much.

Author's Response: Well, although Willow's magic comes in handy... it only adds some fun things but really doesn't make things super easy. glad u are still reading :D

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/15/2009 - 04:07 am Title: CH 4

This was thrilling. I wonder who Williams Master was? Is he important to the story. Magic is something new to Spike so he should be given a bit of time to adjust with it.

Author's Response: TheMaster is important, isn't he always? and yes Spike prolly could use some time to get used to magic but ... well.. oops :P

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 - 11:11 pm Title: CH 4

William took the magic well :)
And look there ~ Buffy is after Hank Summers' ships.
A very personal fight.
~ I'm glad you didn't loose the chapter :)

Author's Response: ME too. Thanks :D

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2009 - 10:14 pm Title: CH 4

Ha! Robbing her own jerk of a father. I like that you didn't keep it all human, that Willow still has some of her power with magic in this story. Love the story.

Author's Response: So glad. Keep reading. Not to sound boastfull but, it gets better.

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