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Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2009 - 07:30 pm Title: CH 5

Like the story so far but have a hard time believing anybody would actually start daydreaming when they are in a fistfight. Just silly really and if that was the case then he should be left behind cause he'll probably start daydreaming in the middle of a battle or when the ship is sinking or when he's about to get eaten by sharks....I mean the possibilities are endless of how he would fuck up. As I said I like the story but if you are going to go down that road about distraction you should probably study up on how "thrastalking" is done in competitive sports and take it from there.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2009 - 05:18 am Title: CH 5

I never did like Parker. But then I get the feeling that you don't either. You've written him well.

Author's Response: TY hun. He's kind of fun to write. :D

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2009 - 03:52 am Title: CH 5

Very very mean. Poor Spike getting whooped for Buffy's honor.

Author's Response: no worries, he'll be alright. mostly

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2009 - 02:43 am Title: CH 5

Parker better not have won! That is just so wrong! Spike is a way better fighter considering he kept up with Wood, it's just so frustrating that Parker got the upper hand, Spike should whip his ass for being so rude and crude about the captain. But then again, I guess Spike deserves it for being distracted. I just want to yell "Snap out of it!"

Author's Response: LoL. All i can say to that is u seemed to have grasped the entire messed up situation. And it only gets better..

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 10:19 pm Title: CH 5

That's quite an interesting crew they have there. And Spike start to grow to be a part of it / of them.

Who had thought that Spike can fight so well. Parker though doesn't fight fair.
~ Till next part when the cliffhanger is solved.

Author's Response: LoL.. alright,. TY for reading :)

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 09:35 pm Title: CH 5

Love the little info. on the crew. I never liked Parker and Woods on the show for obvious reasons. But at least Woods had a valid reason on wanting to kill Spike on the show. Parker is just scum and the way he uses women. Although, a part of me didn't feel that bad for Buffy on the show because when you sleep with a guy right away chances are that is the only thing they wanted so you really shouldn't expect more. Anyways, glad to see that you sill have Parker as a jerk in this story. I'm also glad that you have Andrew and Jonathan in the story especially Andrew. I wonder if Andrew is going to have a little man crush on Spike like on the show. That would be too funny. I'm thinking Spike special something that he is going to bring on the ship is that he is going to be an exceptional fighter. Which would be like keeping him alike with the his character from the show. We all know that Spike could have easily taken Woods and Parker if he wants to. But I guess he got distracted. I was hoping that he was going to fight Buffy and win. That would be cool to give Buffy her first defeat. Spike is after all the Slayers of Slayers. haha If Spike could beat Buffy than he might keep that to himself but most likely not. I always felt that Spike was a better fighter than Buffy on the show and if came down to it that Spike could take Buffy. But that is just my opinion. Spike seems to have already have a crush on Buffy. Spike and his lusting feelings for her. I wonder when Buffy is going to start having some lusting feelings for him as well. I'm like come on girl the man is hot. Maybe, in time, Faith could persuade her. Either in making Buffy jealous and flirting with Spike herself or Faith telling Buffy to jump on that piece of salty goodness. LOL Nice little info. about Buffy and her father. I'm happy for Spike that he is feeling that he is finding his place. That he made have a home. That must be a wonderful feeling when you feel like you have no family and home for the longest time. But finally found your place and a place where you can call home. So, I'm happy that Spike is already feeling that way in such a short time on being on the ship.
I hope you update tomorrow but if I must wait longer then I guess I have to. hehe

Author's Response: The crew is an important assortment. Everyone really does bring something that is usefull. I too am a fan of andrew and johnathan, and thought it would be a kick to make them pirates as well. just not the killin kind. Buffy is gonna be a bit busy for lusty thoughts.. but maybe she will have some time to think on it later. *hint hint*

Reviewer: marta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2009 - 06:46 pm Title: CH 5

I'm really enjoying this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Thanks.

Author's Response: Good, and TY, and theres more to read now. :D

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