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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2009 - 06:32 pm Title: CH 12

Forrest was jumpy? I hope he didn't betray Buffy. *reads on* Sadly he is. And Buffy has no clue. Doesn't look good now.
Looking forward to more.
BTW this is 12: Chapter 11 (again 11).

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/04/2009 - 04:13 pm Title: CH 12

Nice chapter. A lot of business stuff happening in this chapter. The only thing I would complain about is that there isn't enough Spike in this chapter. But there is never enough Spike for me. He is my favorite character ever. So, there is never enough Spike/William for me. As I have said before that a lot of business stuff happening in this chapter. I usually have a lot to say and it feels funny to leave a review so short. Can't wait to read more.

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