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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 06:49 am Title: CH 2

Good beginnings.

I know you mentioned at the beginning that there will be historical inaccuracies, but you might like to keep in mind that a sailing ship cannot change its time of departure on a whim - it usually has to wait for high tide. Even iff Red 'magiked' it out, it would draw unwanted attention.

Also, the affirmative is spelled 'aye.'

Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this fic. I love historical ones and look forward to following this one.

Author's Response: The Aye's have it. I'll keep that in mind as I post and go back and fix those up. TY. As for the ship departure, well.. ur right but they only moved departure up by about 30 minutes or so, and well.. im taking liberties for the story. You should see the mess I'm making in the next chapter. I hope that you are still able to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2009 - 06:23 am Title: Ch 1

Great beginning. On to ch 2...

Author's Response: TY so much :D

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 09:14 pm Title: CH 2

Wow. This is turning out to be really exciting. I can't wait to read about Williams adventure. I want to see what he's made of. Test his meddle so to speak, find out what a person is made of. So begins the adventure.

Author's Response: I do hope you like the adventures. The crew is going to be getting in and out of hot water regularly.

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 07:37 pm Title: CH 2

Looking forward to how William reacts to a female captain, and how each of them prove themselves to the other. Good detail and glimpses into the characters by their simple tasks, and I really liked what you showed of Buffy's and Giles' relationship. Definitely interested in what they've been planning. Great start and looking forward to more.

Author's Response: TY so very much. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :D

Reviewer: NeomeBuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 06:21 pm Title: CH 2

This is a fantastic pirate story. I love it. It's nice to see one where Buffy is the captain instead of Spike. They always make Spike the evil captain with Buffy who falls to his wiley ways. But we know Buffy's no weakling. Great story, well written, good detail and characters who come to life. You didn't just stick to Buffy/Spike development but really brought out Xander, Oz, Giles etc. Fantastic. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the kind words. I really hoped to make each character feel like more than just background, and I'm so pleased to see you feel I have. Thanks again :D

Reviewer: ? Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/05/2009 - 03:42 pm Title: Ch 1

Promising story. One thing, though. You use then many times instead of than. It's bothersome. You might want to get a beta.

Author's Response: Oh Wow!! I so do have then for everything. Thank you for pointing that out. i've jsut updated ch 1 and am off to give ch 2 workover as well. TY again for pointing out the grammatical error.

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