[Report This]Date: 05/15/2009 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wh... but... No! You can't do that! She was all with the Spike loveage!
Well, maybe she should be allowed to experience Angel- that would make her realise how much in love with Spike she actually was, even if nothing else did!
Another wonderfully written part! Thank you for posting earlier :P Am actually awake enough to read it!
Really curious about the next bit... maybe Buffy will relent, only to beg for Spike to come back to her? Or maybe she'll kick whistler's stupid ass, right before she gets rid of Angel once more :P
Looking forward to the next bit!
Author's Response: Posted the moment I got home - glad that was on time for you! So many ways this could go now and that's the fun of it! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2009 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Lol I liked Joyce's conversation with Buffy. She seems to be a very even tempered kind of woman. I was worried for Spike there for a second at the start of his conversation with Buffy but luckily Buffy was able to admit her feelings to him. And they once again had amazingly hot sex. Really sweet too. Hmm, I wonder if the claim is going to be brought up in the future again, Well nothing to do but wait and see. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Joyce might be naive about demons and such, but she always struck me as very levelheaded and down to earth. Thank you for liking this!
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2009 - 09:22 am Title: Chapter 8
This is utterly beautiful . So sensual and hot and wild.
"Couldn’t have passed it up, that much joy, not even if I died for it.” So Spike.
You make me so happy.:)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Spike would think that way - don't you just love the man?
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2009 - 02:01 am Title: Chapter 8
Love and adore this fic. I look forward to it being posted every day, and sit up until it is- bearing in mind that I live in England and it is therefore 3:00 am... yeah, little obsessed!
That last part gave me shivers. It was so gorgeous and sexy and tender and... guh. Loved. Cant wait to read more- especially the reaction of the scoobies (can't beat a bit of 'good lord!' ing, and some old fashioned vampire bashing!) :p Hope Buffy realises that she loves him soon, too, and that the whole 'he was a mass murderer for over a hundred years' thing doesnt matter in the grand scheme of things lol!
Love it!!
Author's Response: Oh, wow! 3 am? I'll try to post the rest earlier!
I'm so glad you're liking this! Thank you! Scoobie reactions coming up.
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2009 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter once again. Buffy was very in character running off, but she's young and can't deal with all that happened. I did like Joyce's reaction, she stood by her daughter and realizes she'll never have a "normal" life.
The end was lovely, loved Spike and Buffy making love, not just having sex. And Buffy being so unsure, and Spike being so gentle with her and so caring/
Loved it as usual. =)
Author's Response: I think Spike would have been caring even in canon, if only Buffy had let him. You can see how gentle he is with Dru. I'm so glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
"I jumped his bones"
Loved that line. And more of my lovely vulnerable Spike. And a wonderful, understanding Joyce. Nice chapter. I'm not a fan of the NC17 stuff but I'm bypassing it and still enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a little worried though about you bypassing the NC17. A lot of their emotions are communicated during it and you might be missing important things.
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
I liked Joyce reaction (both letting her go to sleep when Buffy came back and their talk).
Sounds if if Spike saying how much it meant to him helped Buffy decide what she wants and go for it / go for what she wants.
Even if she can't acknowledge her feelings yet.
Enjoyed :)
Author's Response: I always thought that Joyce might be naive, but she was very intelligent and understood Buffy. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
OK - this is better. I really hated that he broke her trust. You should address that. But I love the tenderness!
Author's Response: Let's face it - those were extremely extenuating circumstances! Buffy understands that.
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is a special kind of bliss. :D
Wonderfully exciting and hot, naughty and delicious all the way!
I'm so addicted..
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! A sexually aggressive Buffy was so much fun to explore!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
Well it took Spike about 2 seconds to resist. lol That ending was hot though.*fans self* At least Spike didn't take full advantage of her, but I wonder how long it'll take Buffy to remember everything that happened.
On a side note, that outfit was so not appropriate for taking little kids trick or treating. Just who was she trying to impress? haha
Then again, neither was Buffy's outfit for Willow. I can just see the kids now. 'We're with the hooker and the vampire hooker'. lol But I kid. I loved this chapter, and Buffy and Spike will have a hard time going back to the status quo after what just happened between them. And that just makes me anticipate the next update even more. :D I'm so glad you're updating so fast.
Author's Response: Spike resist? :D He couldn't have held out under that much temptation. I'm so glad you're enjoying this! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter 7
Spike knows when to compromise. It sounds as if he has thought a long time about what it means to be a slayer.
And then you've made me curious wonder what costume Buffy would wear. Guh... one in a lifetime chance - a vamp? Impossible for Spike to resist her. *g*
Ah I wondered if there would be a claim. Points for Spike to want Buffy to decide if she still wants it when the spell has ended.
Very hot... I hope Buffy takes it well now that the spell is over (and remember what happened.
~ Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Spike's been thinking, all right. And I wanted to have fun with a sexually aggressive Buffy, so the vamp costume was irresistible!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 7
Damn that was sooo hot and sexy! Loved it. I like that Spike is not killing and is willing to make compromises. Loved how he described how he wants her like the Hunger. And Buffy definitely dressed like that for him. Great twist on the "Halloween" epi and Buffy losing her virginity.
Lets hope Buffy doesn't become Denial! girl, cause hey at least he didn't claim her and he could have.
Amazing chappie, dreamweaver ! Can't wait to see what happens now.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Something had to break the deadlock, even though there might be repercussions. I'm so glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 03:37 am Title: Chapter 7
You leave us like THAT? Shame! Haha. Once again, I am in complete awe of the way you are twisting the Buffy storyline... If only Joss had had the same ideas. I like your method of only posting after you finish a story... I wish more authors would do that!
Author's Response: I always thought that an evil Spike at his worst would still be better than Angel at his most good. And I hate waiting to find out what's going to happen - couldn't possibly put people through weeks and weeks of waiting!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 7
No NO - He took her virginity and she doesn't even remember it?! He had better make this up to her with some major tenderness. How will she ever trust him again?!!
Author's Response: Memories are blurry, but they'll come back all too sharply. And then what? :D
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter 7
the 'despairing recklessness' is so like Spike. I loved this chapter and your description of Buffy as a vamp and Spike's feelings about being with her under a spell were so real and textured. At the beginning, when Spike compared wanting her to the Hunger, and Buffy began to understand just how real his feelings for her were...
I need more! Wonderful chapter, but I'm left with so many questions about what happens next that I can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you like it! Thank you! Just have to clean up the next chapter and it'll be up tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 7
haha sorry I just realised in my desperate state to read on before I left a bit of an abrupt rude review, what i meant to say is i absolutely adore all your stories and re read at least one a week, or even better let a few weeks lapse and then reread them and its like getting to read them all over again. You are truly a gifted writer and its true what they say - no effort on behalf of the reader shows a great amount of effort on behalf of the author. brilliant. I just love it when I see you've updated, it makes going to work so much easier with having my day brightened a little! i actually used to spend so much time reading spuffy and sort of went off it when things got busy but I still check in to the spuffy realm for your updates alone these days. thank you for your brilliant stories
Author's Response: That wasn't rude at all! That was hugely flattering! And, wow, it's fantastic that you like to reread my work! Thank you! I love Spuffy and am learning to how to write by working on these stories. I'll be writing them for ages. I'm so glad you like them!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2009 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 7
i am begging you please god update again soon, you are literally the best author i know on this site
Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you! Next chapter up tomorrow. Promise!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
Quick updates, lengthy chapters, smoochy goodness... can a reader really ask for more? :)
Wonderful, my dear, as always!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I don't post until the story is completed and only needs to be checked for errors, because I hate to keep people hanging. I'm so glad you like this!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow! Talk about a nice distraction. lol
So Spike is now the Master of Sunnydale. Good for him. I always knew that boy would make it far. Of course him being master and helping Buffy has got to come to a head sooner or later. Will he choose the yellow pill or the blue pill?
In the mean time I'm glad he's finally met Joyce. And that she likes him. How else is he going to get his hot chocolate? Well I guess he just got something sweet from Buffy. With hopefully much more to come in the future. And, aww. I'm so glad that Spike was finally able to admit his true feelings. Not just out-loud but to Buffy as well. Now they've just got to reach a point where she doesn't fight it so much.
Author's Response: Much more coming! I'm so glad you're liking it! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
(Well Xander doing the CPR set only Angel in a bad light - not sure if Joss wanted to do (to show) that but he did.)
Simple curiosity would make him notice and she wanted to rub it in, what he had walked out on. Illogical. She knew that. Oh but I love Buffy's logic. :D
Good to see Spike back now. :) (And he even had the opportunity to enjoy Buffy's new outfit ;))
Spike has already fallen .... Buffy seems to be on her way, being attracted.
Awe :) Joyce wants to meet him. She was very convincing. ;)
And she noticed Spike's situation regarding Buffy. The eyes of a mother...
Mmmm Spike confessed. At last Buffy isn't rejecting him straight away. Would have hurt Spike. And Buffy doesn't want to do that.
~ Enjoyed the new update :)
Author's Response: Most girls would do a make-over, right? :D
Here, Buffy hasn't been damaged by Angel and isn't so cruel and unfeeling as she was in canon. (I hated that!) I'm so glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm so incredibly happy with what you're doing here. Wonderful chapter , wonderful way of picturing Spike helplessly in love.
The ending scene is so gorgeous , so sensual and passionate it made my heart tighten in my chest.
"He knew how to cherish what he had. To ask for more would be to break the spell. She would come back to herself then and remember exactly how wrong this was. He didn’t expect to ever get more. This was a moment out of time. He cherished it, stored it up in his memory, drowning in her, the feel, the taste, the scent of her, the way her hands fluttered over him, those light, tentative caresses that got past all his defences and touched every hidden vulnerability deep down inside himself that he tried to deny."
Those lines are perfect .
Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you like it! That for me is the vulnerable side of Spike, evil or not.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:57 am Title: Chapter 6
I find this story enthralling, and this chapter was especially good, but I am troubled by the fact that Buffy doesn't even seem to care that Spike is probably out eating people whenever he's not with her. At least in your other stories you had them make a deal, or Spike had his Soul, which prevented it. Buffy (and her mother) turning a blind eye to Spike's feeding seems a little too OOC to me.
Author's Response: I thought about that too and hoped it wouldn't hit people quite yet. Buffy and Spike discuss it in the very first scene of the next chapter, and Joyce and Buffy discuss it in Chapter 9. A compromise is possibly and Spike is the one who initiates it.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:56 am Title: Chapter 6
I find this story enthralling, and this chapter was especially good, but I am troubled by the fact that Buffy doesn't even seem to care that Spike is probably out eating people whenever he's not with her. At least in your other stories you had them make a deal, or Spike had his Soul, which prevented it. Buffy (and her mother) turning a blind eye to Spike's feeding seems a little too OOC to me.
Author's Response: I thought about that too and hoped it wouldn't hit people quite yet. Buffy and Spike discuss it in the very first scene of the next chapter, and Joyce and Buffy discuss it in Chapter 9. A compromise is possible and Spike is the one who initiates it.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter 6
yay! spuffyness i love this story, absolutely love it! keep going! update soon!`
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you! More coming.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2009 - 06:15 am Title: Chapter 6
Absolutely wonderful chapter, amazing even. Thank you.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Thank you!
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