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Reviewer: ravynsprt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2009 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 4: Just a Patrol

Hey, I'm liking the story so far...but I'm wondering....what happened to Anya? She was walking Dawn to Spike's crypt to talk to him about what Xander did, but when Dawn gets to the crypt Anya isn't with her and she therefore doesn't warn Spike about Xander's phonecall. And too, I was wondering, in the next chapter.....after Angel and Xander leave, Dawn says her good-byes to Buffy and Spike and leaves by herself....isn't it still nighttime? She's going home at night by herself through a graveyard, and neither Spike or Buffy care?

Author's Response: Well Anya comes up in the next chapter. As for Dawn wandering around alone. hmm. I'll have to look into that. Excellent point.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2009 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Just a Patrol

So Anya told Dawn - but Dawn didn't talk to Spike yet or I missed it. I feared first that Angel (assuming it was him) would arrive when Spike was on patrol but Angel still has to drive to Sunnydale so he should arrive soon.
Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: It didn't happen yet. It's coming up in the update. (To be honest, I had sort of skipped that part and forgot about it or something in my original writing but in the new chapters, it's all taken care of. Thanks so much for your chapter by chapter interactions. It helps me stay on track with the story and fill in gaps I don't always see.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2009 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 4: Just a Patrol

Wonder who Xander called?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: It's coming up! Enjoy. Three more chapters then a sequel!

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