Date: 06/08/2010 - 09:16 pm Title: the Fourth Chapter
update please. I love this story go Joyce.
Author's Response: I just got the next chapter back from my BETA i shall be posting soon! Promise!
Date: 02/24/2010 - 07:50 pm Title: the Fourth Chapter
Please keep writing this story, because I would like to read the end of it. Update as soon as you can.
Date: 02/07/2010 - 06:26 pm Title: the Fourth Chapter
Aw! Cute Spuffy moments!! This is turning out to be really good. Joyce is really something else to go that far to ensure her daughter's safety. I also like the way that Spike is portrayed here. He's so adorable and sexy when he teases Buffy. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 01/31/2010 - 03:31 am Title: the Fourth Chapter
I love the Buffy dialouge (esp. the original stuff you put in her mouth).
Date: 01/25/2010 - 10:49 pm Title: the Fourth Chapter
So good to see an update :)
Loved the talk between Joyce and Buffy in the car. *gg*
Sounds Buffy is a bit better after this, the talk.
Yes, it was indeed the ring. :) Well Spike has a lot to do know. Looking forward to read how he manages / to another update.
Date: 01/25/2010 - 10:49 pm Title: the Fourth Chapter
So good to see an update :)
Loved the talk between Joyce and Buffy in the car. *gg*
Sounds Buffy is a bit better after this, the talk.
Yes, it was indeed the ring. :) Well Spike has a lot to do know. Looking forward to read how he manages / to another update.
Date: 01/25/2010 - 09:01 am Title: the Fourth Chapter
AWESOME!!! Thanks for the update, I can't wait to see what happns next! I also love how youve managed to tie in bits and pieces from actual episodes! Great!
Date: 01/25/2010 - 05:39 am Title: the Fourth Chapter
Yay, an update! I do so enjoy this fic. :)
Date: 01/25/2010 - 04:34 am Title: the Fourth Chapter
Very much enjoyed Spike and Pike and their mini pissing contest. Not that Spike couldn't totally house him, but it was cute. Also love the nods of dialogue to "Something Blue" and "Harsh Light of Day". Classic lines but in new and interesting places. I think they are adorable knocking each other out of bed. Truly two adolescents. Fantastic. Update soon.
Date: 01/25/2010 - 04:28 am Title: the Fourth Chapter
I am glad to see this story updated. I am looking forward to their arrival in Sunnydale.
Date: 01/25/2010 - 12:31 am Title: the Fourth Chapter
Awesome, Amazing, Wow, Hot, Funny, basically I LOVED it!!!!! :) I also definitely Can't Wait to read more, so please keep up the Amazing work!!!!! :) Thanks for sharing! Take Care, Amber :)