This is... wow. not in good way. I was expecting more have enjoy you're other fics. I think characterization is bad, William would never be in this kind of relationship, not the way you painted his character originally plus this is spuffy site not spike.buffy.cordylia.

Plus then is all this story going to be finding clothes? Cos if I wanted to read about that I would get a vogue magazine... you've done 5 chapters of clothes shopping and it's boring not interessting. the best bit was the recounting of the friends scene but only because it made me laugh to remember that part in friends not because it contributed to the story.

Also buffy and cordy come across as very airhead, I can't understand why??? Please tell me why you massacred their characters so much they are strong women in the show and you have made them weak and vapid and unlikable.

And not even any smut yet you are good at smut just make the rest of the chapters smutty like taking off all the clothes he jusst bought and that would be good.

I don't understand cos the first fic was pretty good though not as good as some but still I liked it but this one is just boring. Who wants to read abotu people going clothes shopping? I don't know, english not my first language maybe there is a problem?

Author's Response: Thanks you for taking time to read and review. I can appreciate the fact that you may have liked my other fics, and this one isn't doing it for you. It does blow my mind that you would take the time to write SOO much about a story you didnt like. But, since you did, let me address your issues. The title of the story was a good indication that there would be some shopping involved, so that shouldn't have been a surprise. It also lends to the naive character feeling better and perhaps a bit more confident when he gets a good reaction from his girlfriends. There have been 4 chapters of shopping, not 5. The first chapter took place at their apartment. As far as the girls looking like airheads... no idea where your coming from. The characters on the show were far more vain than the ones in my story. Maybe you didn't watch the show?? You say no smut? Did chapter 5 not included 3sum sex in a public dressing room? I am thinking maybe your understanding of what the spuffy realm is all about is wrong. The ruls of the site are clearly posted and it was clearly stated in the summary that Cordelia was included. My final comment to you is to yours about the characterization of William. This story is all human/alternate universe.. I can paint him anyway I chose. He isn't Spike from the show, nor are the girls the characters from the show. I hope you read this, and next time if you have so many questions, leave your name and email and I will gladly get back to you.

*sighs* Wish MY clothes shopping could be so much fun.....wanna come shopping wiv me?!!! Another great chapter honey-bun, more please and soon!!

Author's Response: I will shop with you anytime :) just let me know when Thanks for the read and review, Andy!

I am following this series devotedly, but I have been using my PDA - it is ridiculously time consuming just to type out one sentence so I am catching up on my reviewing while I have a keyboard in front of me.
That being said....I think William is just adorable and very innocently naive (very attractive qualities.) The pairing of Buffy and Cordelia was well chosen, with them both having strong and sexy personalities. And the coat! Finally the coat (love that leather smell!) Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much msspikester. Its a pleasure to get your reviews and find that you are enjoying this story chapter after chapter. More to come and soon :)

Heehee you made me laugh with the Ross part. I never watched friends that often, but I remember that part he was stuck in the bathroom trying to take the pants off haha. I'm glad you are making William more Spikish lol both are hott but Spike is just.... SEXY lol

I can't wait for another update!!! MORE!

Author's Response: *hugs Chantel tight* Thanks for the review sweetie! That is one of my favorite Friends episodes and just had to put it in there. Glad you liked. Make over is coming along nicely. More soon I promise :)

This was too funny.LMAO at Will sitting in the dressing room laughing about Friends cause that epi is so friggin funny. And I love that he got his duster,cause ya know the duster is just so Spike. I love your Will, he's so adorkable and sweet.

Can't wait for more of this shopping trip. :)

Author's Response: Thanks AMI! I thought it was funny too! It was the first thing that popped into my head as I plotted chapter and had to add. Thanks for liking Will, others seem a bit confused by him *giggles like a mad woman*

Lmao about the 'Friends' scene reference! :D I couldn't help picturing William wifh his pants around his knees (which is great all by itself :P ) and the gooey paste coating his legs like Ross in that ep heehee Let's hope that William's pants don't shrink!

The makeover hit a big landmark with the buying of the leather duster :D I like how the girls wanna make him look hotter, but are nervous about someone else trying to snap him up if he looks too good heehee Such a fun little couple+1 they are ;)

I lurve this story, thanks again for continuing the saga! *Mwwwwah!*

Author's Response: Thanks PB *hugs sooo tight* I couldnt help myself with the Friends reference HAHAHAHA and the duster is just perfect *wink* The makeover has definitely begun, cant you just see him.. *sigh* more to come and soon!