Hahahahehehe That was great! Poor Buffy and Cordy got too carried away with the dye. I'm glad though.. bleached out Spike/William is a hot combo. Loved the chpa, made me giggle alot. Good job! *thumbs up*

*hugs and smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks Chantel, giggling with you at the girls error, more to come and soon :)

Aww Kitten i can't wait to see this party u mentioned. Go Will in his daringness to try new these and please his girls :) great job more please :)

Author's Response: *giggles* The party is going to be great, I promise!

Sorry about that kitten, i was too shocked to write anything else!! My monitor had just melted, so had my eyeballs!! what actually happened was, I had a battery malfunction - f'kin thing fell out! B ut back to the fic, smokin' or what!! Kinky little buggers!! More please!!


Author's Response: heeheehee Thanks Andy, so glad you enjoyed :) I wondered if the O was OOOoooooo and maybe the computer fried :) More to come!

Fun fun in the changing room. Who wouldn't want to be a fly on that wall...or better yet the fourth participant :P

Author's Response: MMMM being the fourth would have been interesting, I agree with you! Thanks for the R&R, Brett!

This is... wow. not in good way. I was expecting more have enjoy you're other fics. I think characterization is bad, William would never be in this kind of relationship, not the way you painted his character originally plus this is spuffy site not spike.buffy.cordylia.

Plus then is all this story going to be finding clothes? Cos if I wanted to read about that I would get a vogue magazine... you've done 5 chapters of clothes shopping and it's boring not interessting. the best bit was the recounting of the friends scene but only because it made me laugh to remember that part in friends not because it contributed to the story.

Also buffy and cordy come across as very airhead, I can't understand why??? Please tell me why you massacred their characters so much they are strong women in the show and you have made them weak and vapid and unlikable.

And not even any smut yet you are good at smut just make the rest of the chapters smutty like taking off all the clothes he jusst bought and that would be good.

I don't understand cos the first fic was pretty good though not as good as some but still I liked it but this one is just boring. Who wants to read abotu people going clothes shopping? I don't know, english not my first language maybe there is a problem?

Author's Response: Thanks you for taking time to read and review. I can appreciate the fact that you may have liked my other fics, and this one isn't doing it for you. It does blow my mind that you would take the time to write SOO much about a story you didnt like. But, since you did, let me address your issues. The title of the story was a good indication that there would be some shopping involved, so that shouldn't have been a surprise. It also lends to the naive character feeling better and perhaps a bit more confident when he gets a good reaction from his girlfriends. There have been 4 chapters of shopping, not 5. The first chapter took place at their apartment. As far as the girls looking like airheads... no idea where your coming from. The characters on the show were far more vain than the ones in my story. Maybe you didn't watch the show?? You say no smut? Did chapter 5 not included 3sum sex in a public dressing room? I am thinking maybe your understanding of what the spuffy realm is all about is wrong. The ruls of the site are clearly posted and it was clearly stated in the summary that Cordelia was included. My final comment to you is to yours about the characterization of William. This story is all human/alternate universe.. I can paint him anyway I chose. He isn't Spike from the show, nor are the girls the characters from the show. I hope you read this, and next time if you have so many questions, leave your name and email and I will gladly get back to you.

Hehe, his transformation is going quite well. Love the interaction between the three of them. It's all really cute. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks Jake, fluffy and smutty *sigh* more to come!

Ohhh hohhh! That was HAWTT!! Loved it! YOU MUST UPDATE SOONER!! Gahh. I wanna know what smutty goodness will happen at the party!

Author's Response: I know I got a bit behind on this story when I started writing the summer lovin' series, but I should be back on track. The upcoming party should be super fun ;)

Loved it =D these guys are really sweet together, looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks Laura, I hope to be updating this week :)

LOL, if what happened to Ross actually happened to him I doubt he'd ever face the girls again. This story is so fluffy that I dread to think of the possibility of things going wrong at some point *bites nails*

*smooches*

Author's Response: I will make sure nothing catastrophic happens to this trio. Keep with me :) theres much more to come.

LOL, gay William is a hoot!
*hugs*

Author's Response: heehee I love gay william too! *hugs back*

LOL! I loved the friends bit. You should add a link to the youtube video for those who aren't familiar with the episode. Brilliant Leather Duster. Fits just right.

Author's Response: Thanks Brett *huggles* maybe I should !!! and yes duster fit perfect :)

Hee, as I was reading about William heading to the changing room, I remembered that episode of Friends... then William remembered it lol

Anyway, great chapter mmm Spike in leather...

Author's Response: OMG Amy, thats so funny! I hadnt really thought about it till I started writing and then couldnt stop laughing :) so glad you liked and yes... yummy! Thanks for the read and review!

ok so i've read this and sorry but i can't like it ! not because its threesome , nothing to do with that. It just that the William character it's too stupid, makes me wanna hit him in the head, the personalities are too fake, forced on him, he's not , and i repeat, NOT LIKELY. te girls are fine. William is a total nerd who gets laid and inmediatly calls his dude to tell him, or laughs in a creepy way in a dressing room over a Friends episode ? come on !



Author's Response: Thank you sincerely Jazz for your review. Its nice to know that there are people willing to read ALOT of something they don't like and then review. I'm sorry you didn't like either story, but I might point out a few things you may have missed. William isn't stupid, he naive... if you don't know the meaning of that word, look it up. Also, he never called his "dude" after he got laid.. his "dude called him to see if his theory was correct about the girls (this was in TC1). If you are claiming the personalities are forced.. DUH, this is an all human story. And if the girls are ok by you, what "personalities" are you talking about. And, last but not least, why would you POSSIBLY think that he was laughing "creepily" in the dressing room. He was genuinely tickled by the memory of a humourous TV show brought on by the act of trying on the leather pants. I do hope my story hasn't irritated you so much you do hit an actual person in the head, but, I sure did get a kick out if it. Thanks! I am still laughing at your response ! HAHAHAHA