Reviews For What I've Become
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Reviewer: Spikelissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2009 - 10:10 pm Title: Becoming

Had to come in and review for this. Taking a minor breakage from washing dishes lol.

The horrorific feeling was very vivid for me. The fact she was wishing to die is something I believe most rape victims while admist this pain - whether young or older - crave this at that time. The strength you have for this sort of horrific vivid imagery astounds me. The strength it gives those to do the same for themselves to write this type of horror is amazing and heartfelt. This I saw as the ultimate evil. Even hearing Angel's past I truly felt he was the evil incarnate himself. Dru is proof. Vamps tho evil for the killing I don't think I could even count that. The torture and horror is something I would count and this is just something I could never grasp with Spike. Where was the terror? I saw attempted evil and just being a predator but still...Ok rant over lol.

I love how you included a partial claim - though for assistance/ownership. Interesting. Makes ya wonder if she had done this would Spike have been tied to her, but later died when she jumped? Hmmm okay over thinking that lol. Typical Xander and I want to say typical Giles too on to review second chapter! Love this story!!!!

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2009 - 12:27 am Title: Becoming

Poor Buffy, I feel so bad for her. Am off to the next chapter...

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 05:24 pm Title: Becoming

That was really good and interesting. interested to see where you take this next.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2009 - 01:28 am Title: Becoming

Hey Jake. A strong beginning!

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: immortalangel08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 02:14 pm Title: Becoming

I love it!!!! I decided that I should leave a formal review. You are the QUEEN of angst. *hugs big sis*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 11:34 am Title: Becoming

Interesting twist but poor Buffy.
Hope you'll continue to write this.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 04:44 am Title: Becoming

Interesting that a claim was made as part of the pact to take out Angelus and subdue Dru, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: menolly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 03:12 am Title: Becoming

I LOVE IT! please update soon! i need backstory

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 03:02 am Title: Becoming

Well, i was confused at first but now seeing that answer at the end of the chapter i'm connecting the dots. I like were this is going. I'm not sure where that is but i'm enjoying the ride so far. Buffy claiming Spike that's a new one. a one sided claim from her. I'm intrigued to see where this will go. please do continue. u have my permission ;) hehe

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/12/2009 - 02:40 am Title: Becoming

"Jump off a cliff, you stupid... Hey, we're not allowed to say that word in this house, silly wench. Now why would I tell you to jump off a cliff? I don't want to be put away in jail for murder. I'm too fragile to be someone's you know what.

Good start. Is there more?

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