When will this become 'spuffy'? When will it progress past Spike repeatedly being raped by his doppelganger? I read this even though it was disturbing because I thought it, Spike's capture and rape by his double, would be a means to an end, that it had a point. Now it just seems like that's all there is to the story, because that has been 95% of the story. I think you have incredible writing skill because your description of Spike's torment was visual enough that it was very bothersome for me, it invoke deep emotional feelings. That being said is there a true point, plot to the story and I have to be a bit more patient, or will it continue as is in which case I really don't care to continue reading it.

Author's Response: Hello Cynthia. Thanks for giving this story a chance, and for saying that it is well written. The story is seven chapters long and is complete. There is Spuffy in this both involving TwinSpike and real Spike but I have to warn you that it is not a happy tale. They will be posted daily once I have acheived verification from the site. I totally understand if you decide against continuing, but there is a little more to come plotwise. Thanks again for taking the time to comment.