Date: 06/29/2009 - 11:57 pm Title: Three
I agree with your endnotes. It scarred her, it made her who she was. well done... off to next one :)
Date: 06/27/2009 - 08:30 pm Title: Three
I'm really enjoying your writing. I think you are absolutely right regarding the importance of Angel to Buffy's psyche, and I also agree with your point that it is unrealistic--although a common fanfic theme--that Spike can sex Buffy back to life. I really look forward to seeing how you resolve these issues.
Date: 06/26/2009 - 11:33 am Title: Three
Here on a rec from Tanit, and I'm glad she did rec this fic - really enjoying it so far.
Your writing style is great, really immersing me in the fic and the way you're dealing with S6 Buffy's issues is working really well. The B/A memory was handled well in this chapter, I can see where you're coming from with including it.
I'll be looking forward to more :)
Date: 06/26/2009 - 05:02 am Title: Three
oh Wow. This is getting good. You write beautifully. I definately want more of your story please.
Date: 06/25/2009 - 11:57 pm Title: Three
Hey, Rio --
I sent you a message through the contact author page, but I've had problems with that in the past. Just wanted to give you a heads up. Nothing to get too excited about if it didn't go through, mostly words of encouragement on keeping up the good work. :)
-Kristi
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I did receive the email but I haven't had a chance to answer it until now. I'm glad you like the story and I hope you continue to like it as it progresses.
Also, thank you so much for the rec (I noticed it mention in Brett's review).
:)
Date: 06/25/2009 - 08:59 pm Title: Three
Interesting, seeing Angel's eyes becoming blue like Spike's.
And kissing good bye. Yeah, and Buffy should look out for Willow.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews.I'm glad you like the story so far and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it int he future. I'll also take your advice and try to cut down on the wordiness, it's a really bad habit. Thank you again for the great feedback.
Date: 06/25/2009 - 01:57 pm Title: Three
Great chapter. Buffy is confused and mixed up but trying to hang onto her old, guarded self from after Angelus, and you make it very clear without having to come out and state it. I liked the idea of the dream, and the goodbye kiss.
Date: 06/25/2009 - 01:54 pm Title: Three
Nothing to worry about from me with the B/A scene. It was, like everything else you've written so far, beautiful. Lyrical, even. I like your thinking, too, that Spike-sex isn't a magic bullet. Oh, SURE, it can't hurt... hahah I'm just sayin'. :D But it's no miracle to instant Buffy happiness.
And this: She had been cold for so long that she no longer knew what to make of the heat.
Makes me want to pet her hair and tell her that it's okay to live and love again.
This is so brilliantly written. Thank you for sharing.